A sunrise

Today I saw a sunrise

Felt the cool air touch my face

Heard the birds sing

Heard the trees silent voices

A moment to reflect

A moment of joy

A moment of sadness

A moment of hope

 

Hope is the last that you should lose.Have a great afternoon

 

Thanks , same to you

 

Hermosos tu poema Juan. Nos regalas un montón de bellas imágenes. Tus versos reflejan tristeza pero también esperanza, esa maravillosa naturaleza que nos rodea y mima, nos da el ejemplo siempre sigue adelante a pesar de todo, siempre renace... Mis saludos mas cordiales.

 

Gracias Laly
tus palabras son un honor para mi
No puedo escribir poemas alegres, quzas nunca mas
Juan Pablo

 

Sunrise is always a sense of hope eventho we might not feel it at the time...
Its a pleasure reading your verses on a night with no moon,

 

Thanks Guadalupe

 

Juan Pablo,
sunrise in the country side is magical at dawn...eyes closed, our heart beating slows down,
every movement leaves us as the sunlight filters through our soul.

I have enjoyed quite a few of those...with coffee and apple pie.

Saludos,

fidel guerra.

 

Thanks, really appreciate your words

 

You tell us with your words in a good English, dear poet Juan Pablo, that today you have seen a sunrise.
I imagine it has been a special sunrise in your life because who can know how many sunrises you had
seen, maybe you don't even know it yourself. To me, it's not a sad poem. And it can't be that when there
is only a moment of sadness but there are a moment of joy, a moment to hear the birds singing, when
you're able to feel, to think about or reflect on, and especially when there is (even a moment) the invaluable
hope, and when you're able to listen the silence of tree voices: very beautiful metaphor.

With my congratulations, a strong and fraternal hug,

Ulpiano

 

Ulpiano, I do not have words to express my thanks for your kind words, thoughts and comments