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La Torre de BabelDiscutiendo poema Baby, please, stop loving me! en el foro La Torre de Babel; Maybe it’s too hard to say,
perhaps it’s hard to understand,
but baby I gonna tell you
you’re making me bad, so bad.
The shadows at night come to me,
a ghost in the silence appears,
and ...
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Localización: Argentina
Sexo: Femenino
Baby, please, stop loving me!
Maybe it’s too hard to say,
perhaps it’s hard to understand,
but baby I gonna tell you
you’re making me bad, so bad.
The shadows at night come to me,
a ghost in the silence appears,
and I can see his face
and I can say his name, it’s you…
Baby, please, stop loving me!
Baby, please, you hurt me!
I can’t be close to you
because I see the truth.
Baby, please, forget me!
Find another one
who can be by your side and hold you
better than me.
Some memories came back to my mind.
Your eyes’re still staring at me.
I don’t find a solution, it’s over…
Just pray.
Baby, please, stop loving me!
Baby, please, you hurt me!
I can’t be close to you
because I see the truth.
Baby, please, forget me!
Find another one
who can be by your side and hold you
better than me.
better than me.
Maybe it’s too hard to say,
perhaps it’s hard to understand,
but baby I gonna tell you
you’re making me bad, so bad.
(canción)
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Mensajes: 2,554
Localización: Puerto Rico
Sexo: Masculino
Re: Baby, please, stop loving me!
Cita:
Originalmente Escrito por lauflorcita
Maybe it’s too hard to say,
perhaps it’s hard to understand,
but baby I gonna tell you
you’re making me bad, so bad.
The shadows at night come to me,
a ghost in the silence appears,
and I can see his face
and I can say his name, it’s you…
Baby, please, stop loving me!
Baby, please, you hurt me!
I can’t be close to you
because I see the truth.
Baby, please, forget me!
Find another one
who can be by your side and hold you
better than me.
Some memories came back to my mind.
Your eyes’re still staring at me.
I don’t find a solution, it’s over…
Just pray.
Baby, please, stop loving me!
Baby, please, you hurt me!
I can’t be close to you
because I see the truth.
Baby, please, forget me!
Find another one
who can be by your side and hold you
better than me.
better than me.
Maybe it’s too hard to say,
perhaps it’s hard to understand,
but baby I gonna tell you
you’re making me bad, so bad.
(canción)
realmente hermoso poema...parece una cancion! solo una pequena observacion. En el tercer verso el verbo " I " debe ser seguido por " 'm " para que el verso pueda expresar una idea completa y logica..." I'm gonna tell you "
fuera de esa infima observacion, el resto de la composicion esta padrisima! RRR
Great song my dearest. If you ever put some music to that lirics, please let me know, because I´m sure that´d be a great song.
Kind regards and kisses
-angel-
Mensajes: 2,640
Localización: Argentina
Sexo: Femenino
Re: Baby, please, stop loving me!
Cita:
Originalmente Escrito por Ricardo R. Ruiz
realmente hermoso poema...parece una cancion! solo una pequena observacion. En el tercer verso el verbo " I " debe ser seguido por " 'm " para que el verso pueda expresar una idea completa y logica..." I'm gonna tell you "
fuera de esa infima observacion, el resto de la composicion esta padrisima! RRR
Perhaps you're right Richard, I will look for some information about this grammar tip. Thank you for visiting my song. Kisses
Mensajes: 2,640
Localización: Argentina
Sexo: Femenino
Re: Baby, please, stop loving me!
Cita:
Originalmente Escrito por Angel de Jesus
Great song my dearest. If you ever put some music to that lirics, please let me know, because I´m sure that´d be a great song.
Kind regards and kisses
-angel-
WELL, I 'M GOING TO TELL YOU THAT I'VE PUT MUSIC TO THESE LIRICS, BECAUSE I ALWAYS COMPOSE WITH MY GUITAR ON...
THIS IS ONE OF THE SONGS THAT USES TO LIKE MOST.
HUGS AND KISSES ANGEL
THANK YOU FOR COMING.
bueno pero que bueno volverte a leer algo tuyo saludos de veras
__________________ Yo soy el Rey del lejano Oriente
Quien beba mi caliz no temera a la muerte,
Tenganme miedo,que yo a nadie Temo
¡ATENTO DIOS QUE PUEDO LLEGAR AL CIELO!
Mi dueño,nada se compara a tenerte amando cada detalle,bebiendo mi alma entre las sabanas,conspirando con la luna para versar en mis cabellos y adornar mi cuerpo con la luz de tus caricias.Aun hoy,que te marchaste,te suspiro,mio y te extraño siempre.
TE AMO JULIO,EL CESAR QUE LUCHO MIL BATALLAS Y MI CORAZON POSEE...
for you!
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