Poema titulado SCARS of LIFE en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; Wrapped by a whirlwind, I´m losing myself. Look to my eyes and tell me what you see. I´ve been waiting ...
Wrapped by a whirlwind, I´m losing myself.
Look to my eyes and tell me what you see.
I´ve been waiting for so long, just to be happy, just to be free.
How can you see me and don´t recognize me.
How can you touch my heart and don´t feel nothing.
Sometimes, I feel lonelyness, anger, and frustration.
Save me, wake me up, save me, come to me.
I can´t wake up,so much I need you.
Call my name to set me free, before my soul fade away.
Now that I know what I´m waiting for.
You can´t be just an illusion.
I´ve been living a lie.
A sort of mist, preventing me from knowing the truth.
With a kiss, bring me to reality.
Wake me up, save me.
Open my eyes, don´t let me die here in darkness.
My life is difficult, so be it.
Melt my frozen heart with the warmth of your love.
I´m missing in a crossroad, I really need your guide.
Come to me or show me a spark of your shiny soul and I´ll go to you.
I need a soulmate.
I need a friend.
I need a lover.
I need to be heared.
I need a clue to find you.
I need someone to love.
I need someone love me.
May take me a week, may take it longer.
But, I will find you or you will find me...
Re: SCARS of LIFE Great job!!!! Sounds very good.
Te invito a leer el cuento "Aquellas cartas de amor"
http://www.mundopoesia.com/foros/arc...s-de-amor.html
o los poemarios
"Bonita... Poemas de amor"
http://www.mundopoesia.com/foros/arc...s-de-amor.html
y "Encuentro con el mar"
http://www.mundopoesia.com/foros/arc...-poemario.html
Re: SCARS of LIFE Gracias Salvador, lo agradezco más aún viniendo de un gran poeta como tú, uno de verdad, ya que yo escribo en mis ratos libres y solo si estoy inspirado.
Leí tus cartas y algunos poemas... excelentes, tan vívidos,me gustan mucho











Re: SCARS of LIFE Por lo que veo erraste en la colocación de tus dos poemas, como no sé inglés no puedo apreciar este como lo hice con el otro.
Mi sugerencia es la misma, solicutara los administradores lo cambien al foro "Torre de Babel"
La poesíaes gimnasia mentaly emocional.
Re: SCARS of LIFE Basado en "Bring me to life" de Evanescence
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