Tema: If I were to lose you.

...If I were to lose you...

If I were to lose you, I would
lose all of life's joy.

My visions of love would
be black and white. My
world would turn gray.

Years of lost faith,
nights of tears, nights of
sorrow for the love that
was once lost.
Every full moon
I prayed. Night after night
I wished upon a star, I wished
that you'd come too me to my life.

In the mist of
a morning sunrise I found you.
There you were full of
captured innocence
standing beside me.
Since that
day I have lived days of
glory.
I discovered the red in roses
the blue of the sky the
smell of love in the air.

All you should know is that
my heart bleeds
for you. That you are my
all, that you are my life. If
one day I were to lose you, life
would lose all
color too.

por Esme

...If I were to lose you...

If I were to lose you, I would
lose all of life's joy.

My visions of love would
be black and white. My
world would turn gray.

Years of lost faith,
nights of tears, nights of
sorrow for the love that
was once lost.
Every full moon
I prayed. Night after night
I wished upon a star, I wished
that you'd come too me to my life.

In the mist of
a morning sunrise I found you.
There you were full of
captured innocence
standing beside me.
Since that
day I have lived days of
glory.
I discovered the red in roses
the blue of the sky the
smell of love in the air.

All you should know is that
my heart bleeds
for you. That you are my
all, that you are my life. If
one day I were to lose you, life
would lose all

color too.

Aun estando en ingles se lee triste el poema cada letra se siente dolorosa transmites muchas cosas con este escrito porque el idioma al parecer no cambia la forma y la tibieza con la que te expresas pude entender un poco pero esta hermoso el poema en cada una de sus estrofas te quiero mucho Luneta besitos y cuidate mucho.

Mi Luz

Aunque un poco melancólico, también le das un aire de esperanza y otra forma de ver las cosas cuando lo encontraste, aunque haya sido en la bruma de la mañana, pero descubriendo luego ese amor, ese "olor de amor en el aire". Es muy bello y tierno tu poema, de un profundo sentir y en el que te expresas de forma elegante. La última estrofa me gustó mucho, es muy romántica, un resumen de todo el poema, en alguna manera. Te felicito y dejo mis estrellas and my love kisses for you, my Light.

por Esme

...I discovered the red in roses
the blue of the sky the
smell of love in the air....

Simple lines that depict the simple things that convey the highest feeling: love; When you are able to turn those simple things into poetry you are in love. I liked it, a real pleasure.

por Francisco Iván Pazualdo

Aun estando en ingles se lee triste el poema cada letra se siente dolorosa transmites muchas cosas con este escrito porque el idioma al parecer no cambia la forma y la tibieza con la que te expresas pude entender un poco pero esta hermoso el poema en cada una de sus estrofas te quiero mucho Luneta besitos y cuidate mucho.

Gracias Mi Luneta preciosa por estar
aqui en mis letras. Siempre un placer
recibirte mi nino de oro. Besitossss

Esme Tu Luneta.

por Raúl Rouco

Mi Luz

Aunque un poco melancólico, también le das un aire de esperanza y otra forma de ver las cosas cuando lo encontraste, aunque haya sido en la bruma de la mañana, pero descubriendo luego ese amor, ese "olor de amor en el aire". Es muy bello y tierno tu poema, de un profundo sentir y en el que te expresas de forma elegante. La última estrofa me gustó mucho, es muy romántica, un resumen de todo el poema, en alguna manera. Te felicito y dejo mis estrellas and my love kisses for you, my Light.

Mi Sol,

Gracias por llegar, y dejar
tu huella. Hugs and Kisses
Sunshine.

por dunkles_gotisches

When the love is lost, all is lost!!
the colors,
the happines...

it's a pleasure Esme!.

Thanks for your
visit dear friend.
Kissesss..

Esme.

por Z. Gómez

Simple lines that depict the simple things that convey the highest feeling: love; When you are able to turn those simple things into poetry you are in love. I liked it, a real pleasure.

Z. Gomez,

I appreciate your comment
and thougths. A pleasure to
see you here. Kissesss..

Esme