Tema: Perhaps a mistake

Loneliness I wait

loneliness I hope

my only wish is just a break

so I can really go.

We have built so many wonders

and we have crossed so many seas

but it’s so fair to wonder

Is there so much more to see?

But I don’t have the courage

and I don’t have the guts

to take away what I have said

to break what I have promised.

It seems so silly now

but once upon a time

I really meant that vow

that today does not look fine.

I know what you are thinking

and yes, perhaps it was a huge mistake,

because today the freedom it’s too expensive

but I just don’t want my cage.

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Loneliness I wait

loneliness I hope

my only wish is just a break

so I can really go.

We have built so many wonders

and we have crossed so many seas

but it’s so fair to wonder

Is there so much more to see?

But I don’t have the courage

and I don’t have the guts

to take away what I have said

to break what I have promised.

It seems so silly now

but once upon a time

I really meant that vow

that today does not look fine.

I know what you are thinking

and yes, perhaps it was a huge mistake,

because today the freedom it’s too expensive

but I just don’t want my cage.

Great poem---full of mixed emotions--the want for freedom, but hesitance to pay the price..A disdain for a cage that oppresses wings that want to fly.

-Very nice!

The limit of human achievement is the laziness of imagine beyond.

Interesting lines.

Greetings.

Thank you Cesar, I always enjoy reading your poems and your opinions about mines