Tema: The Sweet Ending (Last Minutes of a Lover)

I woke up, he was still there,
What I thought was over, wasn't.
And what I thought it would be a dream, was a nightmare.
It was a torment.
Tough like a war, fragile as love.
I just wanna run away,
I didn't want to see your face again.
I said It was all done.
There was no turning back.
I just wanna close my eyes and wish, wish that this is just a dream.
But you are always around, I'll never be free.
You will never apart.
My screaming is getting soft, I'll must stop talking about love.
I'm a lover who wants to call everything off.

Now I don't feel nothing else.
I just look at you, and think...
At what time should we be dead?
My forces are getting tired,
I just don't wanna breath.
My tears will show to the world,
My misery that feels so sweet for you.
Pain will cut my throat, and yes...I'll finally be alone.

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By Pemberley Winter
I Know what you are...You're gonna be bad for my bussines, I can realize that,

Doesn't sounds like a good ending... myabe it was a sarcasm.
Well, it's not abot stop talking about love, it's about not giving it much more importance than needed and of course, about trying to keep it and not only to find it and... there's a lot of factors and things i would say, but the thing is... that icharge if talk tooo much XD. (nah, a bad joke as alwas) the thing is that i at the end... wouldn't be able to copletly explain the whole thing as good as i'd like to, but i'll tell you this: One must praise love for what it is and not to think what is not.

Alone is not that bad, and sometimes makes you feel better.

My dear and also rainy grey and twisty lonely pem, it's always a pleasure to read you even in the endings when you appear to be desperate.
Hope you're always fine pretty (i'm talking about general and not just about the poem), hugs and lots of kisses for you.

por Redwing

Doesn't sounds like a good ending... myabe it was a sarcasm.
Well, it's not abot stop talking about love, it's about not giving it much more importance than needed and of course, about trying to keep it and not only to find it and... there's a lot of factors and things i would say, but the thing is... that icharge if talk tooo much XD. (nah, a bad joke as alwas) the thing is that i at the end... wouldn't be able to copletly explain the whole thing as good as i'd like to, but i'll tell you this: One must praise love for what it is and not to think what is not.

Alone is not that bad, and sometimes makes you feel better.

My dear and also rainy grey and twisty lonely pem, it's always a pleasure to read you even in the endings when you appear to be desperate.
Hope you're always fine pretty (i'm talking about general and not just about the poem), hugs and lots of kisses for you.

At first I thought...ouchh he didn't like it......bt you know my style..as dark as you said..and as lonley and desperate I can get. what a beautiful way to kill a lover as dramatic as you can. and sometimes silly.
I'm a little bit fine red..thanks for asking!..I hope you are too..things have been quite busy for me these days....
tons of kissess
pemb

por orees19

pain tastes delicious for someones... maybe there are also people like us that appraise freedom over many things else... the feeling of being free of all forces that could influence our decisions, our minds in a negative way... is precious... regards Pemb... congratulations. Good luck.

Thanks Orees for again passing down here at my poems. I really appreaciated. And is nice and gratifying to know that there is another person who likes and understands what I write.
Hugs, Pemb