Poema titulado When you appeared… en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; When you appeared my life changed. Your smile, your eyes, everything was wrong and my mind doesn’t see. When you ...
When you appeared… When you appeared my life changed.
Your smile, your eyes,
everything was wrong
and my mind doesn’t see.
When you appeared I died.
When you appeared the sunflowers changed into black roses,
the light couldn’t shine,
the sky has cried every day, every moment.
When you appear I lose, I cry.
I’m loveless, and you… you are my demon.
My hell is your presence and my heaven your eyes.
When you look at me I can fly
but when I think, what is the meaning of your see?
I fall into the eternal night.
You don’t love me, I don’t love you?
I think… I don’t want to think!
I only want to love to you.
This is the only true, the ugly true.
You love me? I love you.
You want to me? I want to be with you
but I’m only dreaming.
If you wanted me I would know.
When you’re appeared I know you’re impossible.
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Excuse me if I wrote a bad words or ideas, I don't speak english but I like it.
Thanks for read it.
"La vida formó lo que soy ahora; la desdicha, la decepción,
el amor, la amistad... largas horas de melancolía y soledad,
de alegrias e ilusiones, fueron ingredientes esenciales.
No me arrepiento de mi pasado, ni de mi presente...
Sólo me arrepiento de no vivir un siempre despierto..."
****Vince****
Re: When you appeared… Just do it! We are reading your feelings. Be success.
Agua de luna
Respuesta: When you appeared… Viten,
Good poem. Everybody can understand what you meant. Although you don't speak English, you have the great sensitivity of a good poet. Go on, don't give up, you own the two most important things: you have a great vocation and wish to learn English and you are a high-quality poet.
Congratulations.
Fraternally,
Ramiro
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