Tema: Show me

Look at you! What a mess you are.
I met you years ago and what at saw back then it’s nothing compare to what I see today.
May I ask something?
Where are you? Where is your smile?
Where is that beautiful light?
Back in time from head to toe you used to shine.
What happened brown eyes?
Where are you little girl?

So many questions so little answers, you know what? That’s frustrating.
Move your lips and tell me what the hell happen?
Where are your dreams? Where is the person who used to laugh?
That person who only needed a smile to make everyone feel warm, that humorous girl full of life, full of hope.
Who kill you my darling? I simply don’t understand.
Why do I see those dead eyes?

Why do I get this reflection from you?
You cruel mirror don’t play with my mind and show me real me.
Stop reflecting that empty person, which I don’t know, that hideous woman it’s not me.

Have pity of me and show me what I like, what I wish…
please just show me what I used to be, and hide what I have become.

jejeje bueno me imagino que debe ser un por compartirlo

Deep thoughts and reflections that dig beyond that mirror. I am my harshest critic and there is always room for improvement.
However, I like to think that change is good and sometimes the only thing that changes is the perspective of the smile.


Great lines fragilprincesa. A pleasure.

por cenicienta02

jejeje bueno me imagino que debe ser un por compartirlo

Mas bien soy yo quien debe agradecerte x tomarte el tiempo de leer mi poema y de dejar tu comentario tan lindo
Mil gracias resibe muchos abrazos de mi parte

por lluviadeabril

Deep thoughts and reflections that dig beyond that mirror. I am my harshest critic and there is always room for improvement.
However, I like to think that change is good and sometimes the only thing that changes is the perspective of the smile.


Great lines fragilprincesa. A pleasure.

Thanks lluviadeabril for your lovely review, well I would like to think that the change
I go through is a positive one but I’m afraid that this change is the worse I had suffered.
Hugs and kisses and again thanks for your review

por ramiropad

Dear young girl "fragilprincesa",
I think that mirror that your mind has created is lying to you right now. If it were telling the truth, it would say, using your own words: smile, you have a beautiful smile, a beautiful light, you´re still shining, your dreams will come true, you're just beginning to live, you´re still laughing and making everyone to feel warm, you´re full of life, full of hope...
Beautiful poem.
Fraternally,
Ramiro

My dear friend Ramiro, I desperately want to believe in your words but I can’t. I know that I’m young and my life is just beginning but the pain inside my heart it’s so big that I feel old and hopeless, well this is just a “depression attack” as I call them and with time everything it’s going to be ok and I would continue living waiting for another “attack”
Ramiro thanks for your review and for your words they make me feel better