Poema titulado A Moment Of Madness en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; A MOMENT OF MADNESS Is a new feeling, It makes me mad It was something new. I did not pick ...
A Moment Of Madness A MOMENT OF MADNESS
Is a new feeling,
It makes me mad
It was something new.
I did not pick for that.
But still feels good,
Is an overweight happiness.
A forced smile.
A naughty wink.
A hot breeze that goes all over my being.
I don't know what will I do,
How can I fight against this.
It's monitoring me, it is my sense.
I guess I do want to give up.
At the end of the day I feel safe.
A moment of my day....when I feel like hell.
I can always encounter with this moment of madness.
That I call: himself.
This weird and crazy sensation that resumes in one word.
This strange feeling all over my body....that I believe is called: love.
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Pemberley Winter
I Know what you are..You're gonna be bad for my bussiness...I can realize that
Re: A Moment Of Madness love is the most pleasant madness... it makes us seem like zombies haha... glad of stopping by your lines Pemb... my regards. Good luck.
Re: A Moment Of Madness Hey Pem,
You know I had to drop everything and comment. You never fail to amaze, amuse and why not everything that can be compared to that..I love the spontaneous feeling in your verses here, and the end well it simply shows that we figure things out as we go... Though, some day we'll find a word that does justice to the nonsensical chaotic effect of some feelings. Don't you think?
Anyway, sorry to blab.
A huge hug.
Última edición por lluviadeabril; 25/05/2010 a las 17:06
Escribir lo que sientes, no es lo mismo que sentir lo que escribes -scg.
Respuesta: Re: A Moment Of Madness Dear April Rain!:
Heyyyy!!..how are you?, It's been a while, and I'm happy to see you here. Thanks for the compliment, I really appreciated coming from someone so talented as you are. And I'm sure that for example the word "love", means something different from every one of us. But I dare say that I agree like my friend Orees19 said on his comment: THAT LOVE IS THE MOST PLEASENT MADNESS.
Always in a good way, is no good to be sick of love.
Hugs for you aprilllllll!!!!.
Pemb Winter
Respuesta: A Moment Of Madness Dearest Pemb,
It's not necessary to say that this poem is beautiful because all of your poems are. Well, it's not necessary but I've already said it. If you think that love is madness, I believe you are right: it's the most beautiful madness and when we are feeling it, we wouldn't like to return to good sense again.
Congratulations, my friend.
Fraternally,
Ramiro
Respuesta: A Moment Of Madness Ramiro,
How nice is to see you again my friend...I've been quite lost latley. For me it was a good theme to take for a "return". I do believe that LOVE is one of the most precious thing you'll ever find....even sometimes my sad sad poems tell the opposite. Thank you so much for passing by and for your comment. And YES....I guess.....if is not hurtful, is true that no one wants to return to a "normal way".
Hugs for you, Pemb Winter
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