Amniotic wishes (sitting watching the rain)

**orees19** · 26/05/2010, 13:54

Darling
little puddle
we give you our lifes
let us be born from you.

René Escobar
May 26th, 2010

Eco · 26/05/2010, 14:11

Qué hermoso y dulce, sencillamente bello, mis mejores aplausos para vos.

**orees19** · 27/05/2010, 19:40

por Eco

Qué hermoso y dulce, sencillamente bello, mis mejores aplausos para vos.

thank you for your nice comments Eco... i'm glad you liked it... regards. Good luck.

RA · 27/05/2010, 20:11

Orees19,
About your short and good poem, I quote Baltasar Gracian:
"Good things, when short, are twice as good".
Congratulations.
Fraternally,
Ramiro

**orees19** · 29/05/2010, 11:29

por ramiropad

Orees19,
About your short and good poem, I quote Baltasar Gracian:
"Good things, when short, are twice as good".
Congratulations.
Fraternally,
Ramiro

thank you for your comments Ramiro... i'm experimenting a lot with short poems haha... regards. Good luck.

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