Poema titulado Take all of me. en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; You want to take all of me, my smile, my hopes, my sight. I shall run into the forest. Make ...
Take all of me. You want to take all of me,
my smile, my hopes, my sight.
I shall run into the forest.
Make everything dissapear.
You are still on the hunt.
I'll say....."I love to run".
The adrenaline that goes all over my body...
Tells me that there is no sweet honey. You want to take all of me.
You want to hold me, and show me your strengh.
I'm starting to be afraid.
I thought it was a game.
Take all of me..and make it fast.
Make a tragic end...to this game of desire.
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Pemberley Winter
Última edición por Pemberley Winter; 30/05/2010 a las 14:54
Re: Take all of me. in that kind of hunt games... hunters and preys are consumed by the same feeling... it's better not to fight... my best wishes to you Pemb, stop fighting off your emotions haha...








Re: Take all of me. Is better if you don´t think, if just you close your eyes and open your arms, after see you will that it is a great emotion...sweat poetry...like it...
Respuesta: Take all of me. Dearest Pemb,
We, who have the fortune to read with joy the poems you've written, have taken from you all the beautiful things you have been offering to us: your matchless verses, your interminable literary production, your sense of humor, the beauty of your heart. What matters that somebody else takes all the rest? Beautiful and sensible poem.
A fraternal hug,
Ramiro
Respuesta: Take all of me. dearest & dearest & amazingly beloved Ramiro,
That was the most lovely and sweet thing anyone said to me. I'm glad you liked it. And of course I couldn't be more happy with your words such as "literary production" or "sense of humour". That's true...I really love to laugh...is one the most healthy things in the world.
I couldn't be more grateful to have a friend like you, so talented and beloved for me. THANK YOU FOR ALLL FRIENNNNNNNNDD.
hugssss, Pembb Winter
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