Poema titulado Vanishing away en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; Suppose my thoughts no more a disarray. Walk, dark my feet away once, twice, again. those voices will likely bring ...
Vanishing away Suppose my thoughts no more a disarray.
Walk, dark my feet away once, twice, again.
those voices will likely bring me dismay
from digging deeper tombs I can’t abstain.
Taking a step into a gaze that strays
with flowers sitting, kisses on the lips.
A lethal kiss can make a death remain
a walk so lovely in a thought amiss.
Living day a day without regrets
forgetting, kiss the lips and think to stay
to catch the kisses falling from the bliss
and catch the wisps befalling, a dark day.
If sitting, thinking, kissing at death’s gate
there one could simply vanish a few days.
Última edición por lluviadeabril; 20/07/2010 a las 23:40
Escribir lo que sientes, no es lo mismo que sentir lo que escribes -scg.
Respuesta: Vanishing away ohhhhhhhhh April, I'm always surprise the way you can write just a few lines and at the end: make an excellent and brilliant poem.
I like very much the description of your poem. I can always see images in my head, all the kisses, all the gates.
hugs for you and congratulations.
Pemb winter
Re: Respuesta: Vanishing away Pem,por Pemberley Winter
You never fail to leave a smile on my face..Your happiness is truly contagious.
I love reading your comments --thank you.
A huge hug.
Escribir lo que sientes, no es lo mismo que sentir lo que escribes -scg.
Re: Vanishing away Emotionally charged poem, with a great ending. A pleasure to read, thnx for sharing.
El hogar de los escombros
Re: Vanishing away You are most welcome -emotions are an eternal downfall for some of us. For me, impossible to write without them : )
Thank you so much for the honor of your distinguished visit.
Escribir lo que sientes, no es lo mismo que sentir lo que escribes -scg.
Re: Vanishing away (Vows)
I liked this poem so much!! I felt a special essence coming from inside. On every line.
A placer, Lady.
Regards, glory and stars for you.
“ Recorre el camino del vacío.Descansa al refugio del olvido.Bebe la savia de la soledad.Come del fruto de la tempestad.Sigue de frente, sé siempre fuerte;avanza pasillos sin detenerte.Es ahí donde encontrarás La Muerte ”
"Al guardián en mi sepulcro,gracias por esta gentil enmienda,de cargar mi cadáver sin pero alguno;le regresaría el favor si pudiera"
Re: Vanishing away Thank you so much for reading, for the stars D347H (someday I will figure out what that stands for)
Escribir lo que sientes, no es lo mismo que sentir lo que escribes -scg.
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