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My Master.

Poema titulado My Master. en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; When light is....you are a master of love. When dark appears...you are master of disease. When you are with me...things ...

Tema: My Master.

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Predeterminado My Master.

    When light is....you are a master of love.
    When dark appears...you are master of disease.
    When you are with me...things change from black to white.
    I believe in you. Even you once let me down..I'm ready for another chance.

    (why?)

    Because you are the one for me.
    I didn't want to believe that, but it's true.
    The way I look into your eyes.
    The way you smile.
    I shall not give up.
    I'll always be waiting on the other side.

    A wind has taken you from me to another girl,
    Someone weird, a strange person....as it seems.
    I won't talk about her...'cause this poem is about you.

    How you made all the past blown away,
    Like it was a childhood game....the today is the important thing.

    So yes...I'll be there if you want another chance.
    You just have to make up of your mind...'cause someone else may arrive.
    I know you are good.....very deep inside.

    My master of shadows...yes you are.
    You make everything dark...but cozy in the inside.
    So let me tell you this: you make, I play.
    But remember...I won't be always from yourself.

    Pemberley Winter
    I Know what you are..you're gonna be bad for my bussines..I can realize that
    Última edición por Pemberley Winter; 17/06/2010 a las 13:03

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    Predeterminado Re: My Master.

    "..you make, I play."

    Wow, Pem these verses set the stage, lay down the rules in an attempt to correct the icorrigible. Nicely done, somethings are simply what they are others not at all what they seem "light" or "disease" -I wonder if there is something walking that very thin line. My eye is drawn to the duality of the first verse.

    -A huge hug

    Mis Reconocimientos Poéticos

    Escribir lo que sientes, no es lo mismo que sentir lo que escribes -scg.

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Cita por lluviadeabril Ver Mensaje
    "..you make, I play."

    Wow, Pem these verses set the stage, lay down the rules in an attempt to correct the icorrigible. Nicely done, somethings are simply what they are others not at all what they seem "light" or "disease" -I wonder if there is something walking that very thin line. My eye is drawn to the duality of the first verse.

    -A huge hug
    Heeeeeeyy April, I never ever thought you would be thinking those verses. Anyway, it doesn't matter if you don't understand what they really mean, it is important to think what you want to believe. Thanks so much for passing bye friend,
    Hugs, Pemb Winter

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    Nicolle
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    A powerful master... capable to make you wait...
    Interesting lines...
    Just.... that other girl.... mmmm.....KILL HER!!!!!!! lmao!!!!

    Hugs and kisses from Peru!!!

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Cita por Nicolle Ver Mensaje
    A powerful master... capable to make you wait...
    Interesting lines...
    Just.... that other girl.... mmmm.....KILL HER!!!!!!! lmao!!!!

    Hugs and kisses from Peru!!!
    Heyy Nicoleee..nice to seee you hereeee! :D And yes..is very powerful..is special...and talking about that annoying girl.....I'm quite considering the thing you told me LOLLLLL!
    hugsssssss, pembb

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    Redwing
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    Predeterminado Re: My Master.

    First thing first, on the fourth verse you missed an "r", it says "anothe" and well inf the case were other and you'd like to chew your english you "coulda" done it like "anotha" (yes, i Know how to chew that language and my own XD) well just correcta that and ignore my jokes.

    Know let's talk about you and me XD nah, about the poem (jokes, jokes, jokes) mmm... let me tell you, i'm with nicolle at it, KILL THE OTHEEEER XD.

    Seriously, he must be a master and a very skilled one if he can make you wait, but you are also right, maybe someone else can come to you... and then you won't be there for him, life's like that and besides... if hes with someone else not you, you shouldn't be waiting, one must live, and one must enjoy, if things happen they happen, if don't... just move on.

    Kill her! i mean... a pleasure to kiss you... Read you XD.

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Cita por Redwing Ver Mensaje
    First thing first, on the fourth verse you missed an "r", it says "anothe" and well inf the case were other and you'd like to chew your english you "coulda" done it like "anotha" (yes, i Know how to chew that language and my own XD) well just correcta that and ignore my jokes.

    Know let's talk about you and me XD nah, about the poem (jokes, jokes, jokes) mmm... let me tell you, i'm with nicolle at it, KILL THE OTHEEEER XD.

    Seriously, he must be a master and a very skilled one if he can make you wait, but you are also right, maybe someone else can come to you... and then you won't be there for him, life's like that and besides... if hes with someone else not you, you shouldn't be waiting, one must live, and one must enjoy, if things happen they happen, if don't... just move on.

    Kill her! i mean... a pleasure to kiss you... Read you XD.
    How nice is to see you again, Redwing...I missed sooo much your long comments. In one hand you are right.....he must be powerful to make me wait...but on the other hand....is quite selfish from him to let me wait knowing that he might not love me. hahahhaa..and yes I'll kill her any time soon.
    Thanks so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, and for your kissess!!..oh and thanks for the correction..i loved the example and I started to laugh when I read it...you are cool maaaaaaaann,
    tons of loveee, pembb

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