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I See Me Through Your Eyes.

Poema titulado I See Me Through Your Eyes. en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; Shadows, lines, bodies turning around. Images are not clear...at least for me. The wind has make it all blind. The ...

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Predeterminado I See Me Through Your Eyes.

    Shadows, lines, bodies turning around.
    Images are not clear...at least for me.
    The wind has make it all blind.
    The water annoys my vision of you and I.

    But there you are.....
    I see me through your eyes.
    I can see my eyes, I can see my mouth.
    I can see my smile, whenever you step by.

    Oh yes..there it is.
    This naughty wink to you from me.
    And yes...there is your hand, touching my face.
    Slowly caressing my skin, yes..I see me through your eyes.
    Beautiful vision, great paradise.
    It's all on them. It's all of us.

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    Pemberley Winter
    I Know what you are..you're gonna be bad for my bussines..I can realize that

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    Redwing
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    A beautiful romantic poem kinda uncommon in you.

    I liked it, it's like soooo tender and warm (that made me remind a cat O.o) well i was telling you; it also reminded me a song called... "i see you, you see me" performed by "The magic numbers" which is one of my favorite bands (yes, unnecesary info i guess XD).

    I still think that it's weird to see you write romantics, but believe me, i enjoy reading you like that.

    Mmm... no hugs today, just... huge ones XD.

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Cita por Redwing Ver Mensaje
    A beautiful romantic poem kinda uncommon in you.

    I liked it, it's like soooo tender and warm (that made me remind a cat O.o) well i was telling you; it also reminded me a song called... "i see you, you see me" performed by "The magic numbers" which is one of my favorite bands (yes, unnecesary info i guess XD).

    I still think that it's weird to see you write romantics, but believe me, i enjoy reading you like that.

    Mmm... no hugs today, just... huge ones XD.
    Thanks red for step by as you do, I enjoy your interesting comments. why weird?..Am I a queen of tears? hahhahaa. wowwwwww..the magic numbers..i KNOW THAT BAND..but I guess I'll never had the opportunity to listen to that song...I'll hear it and later I'll tell you.
    but I have a doubt.........a cat?----hahhaah you are hilarious!!
    love, pembbbbbbb

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    Poeta adicto al portal orees19 tiene mucho de que estar orgullosoorees19 tiene mucho de que estar orgullosoorees19 tiene mucho de que estar orgullosoorees19 tiene mucho de que estar orgullosoorees19 tiene mucho de que estar orgullosoorees19 tiene mucho de que estar orgullosoorees19 tiene mucho de que estar orgullosoorees19 tiene mucho de que estar orgullosoorees19 tiene mucho de que estar orgullosoorees19 tiene mucho de que estar orgullosoorees19 tiene mucho de que estar orgulloso Avatar de orees19
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    it's like a cold fusion... there's nothing further than a guy and a girl finding themselves into each other's eyes... precious lines Pemb, glad to stop by them. My regards and best wishes to you.

    Mis Reconocimientos Poéticos


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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Cita por orees19 Ver Mensaje
    it's like a cold fusion... there's nothing further than a guy and a girl finding themselves into each other's eyes... precious lines Pemb, glad to stop by them. My regards and best wishes to you.
    Hey Orees, I'm always glad to see you down here at my writings, Thank you so much for always wishing me the best, I know is just an ordinary greeting, but I really like when people say that. Have a nice day..and again..THANK YOU.
    P.Winter

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    Nicolle
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    Predeterminado Re: I See Me Through Your Eyes.

    I feel this poem like a rainy but romantic day, when two become one... just cause of love.

    Pleasure to be here.
    XXOO

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Cita por Nicolle Ver Mensaje
    I feel this poem like a rainy but romantic day, when two become one... just cause of love.

    Pleasure to be here.
    XXOO
    Thanks Nicolle for always being here, I really really appreciated!!!, you are lovely. And the pleasure is mine.
    Pemb

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    Poeta activo uooohhh!!! será famoso muy prontouooohhh!!! será famoso muy pronto Avatar de uooohhh!!!
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    Predeterminado Re: I See Me Through Your Eyes.

    Beautiful poem... i love ... grettings and congratulations...


    "para expresar sentimientos sobran palabras... pero lo que importa son las acciones"
    César Alberto Maldonado Marín

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Cita por uooohhh!!! Ver Mensaje
    Beautiful poem... i love ... grettings and congratulations...
    Thank you so much for passing by. Have a nice day. Pemb.

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