Poema titulado Flashback of a passion. en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; It was like a rush. It's like I can not remember that. The image is not so clear now. I ...
Flashback of a passion. It was like a rush.
It's like I can not remember that.
The image is not so clear now.
I miss seeing you in the darkness of night.
Was I a fool?. Shall I fall for you?.
I let you enter to my heart....
'cause i thought you'd take care of it.
It was quick, a moment of passion.
The smiling in our faces were bright.
But now...it's this empty space..something without sense.
Where should I stand now?
Feeling you so close, but still so far.
I'm able to look but not to touch.
I want that moment again.
I want to see you standing there,
To feel your hands, upon my face.
.....And when our lips touch, I want to feel I can fly.
That last kiss that I thought it would be the start.
Is something easy,
It was something fun.
But now it is me who can't deny.
All this flowers that grow inside me, are from you.
It is love. It is your love that helps to see me through.
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Pemberley Winter
I know what you are..you're gonna be bad for my bussiness..I can realize that.
Última edición por Pemberley Winter; 04/07/2010 a las 16:31
Re: Flashback of a passion. Painful feelings cause the person is not around, not near, and all we have is the thoughts and all we can do is remember the perfect moments of love and passion.
Sad but romantic. Beautiful creation.
Stars, hugs and kisses from Peru!
Re: Flashback of a passion.
Beautiful poem.
As I was reading your comment about Nicolle's
I started to analize the situation.
I think there's no solution
because there's no problem.
You loved
and that's the most important thing here.
I once heard that
Love is the only game
in which doesn't matter if we win,
the important thing is to play it.
Stars for your writting, Pemberly.
__________________________________________________ LEO
Re: Flashback of a passion. One thing is to be fisically close and the other one is to be emotianlly close. Your poem said something like that or at least that's what i thought in some part, i don't know, but i cant tell that when you fall in love... the most important thing is to be both emotionally close...
Beautiful poem pemb, it's always a pleasure to read you even when you seems to be romantic at the begining and melancholic at the ending.
Hugs for you.
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It worths it, Pemberly. I always try to keep in mind that what comes easily, goes easily too; thus
which comes with pain, suffering or problems, hardly goes or it never does.
My friend Teresa used to say: "I have found the paradox that if I love until it hurts, then there is no hurt, but only more love".
A hug for you.
__________________________________________________ LEO
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