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Flashback of a passion.

Poema titulado Flashback of a passion. en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; It was like a rush. It's like I can not remember that. The image is not so clear now. I ...

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    Predeterminado Flashback of a passion.

    It was like a rush.
    It's like I can not remember that.
    The image is not so clear now.
    I miss seeing you in the darkness of night.

    Was I a fool?. Shall I fall for you?.
    I let you enter to my heart....
    'cause i thought you'd take care of it.

    It was quick, a moment of passion.
    The smiling in our faces were bright.
    But now...it's this empty space..something without sense.
    Where should I stand now?

    Feeling you so close, but still so far.
    I'm able to look but not to touch.

    I want that moment again.
    I want to see you standing there,
    To feel your hands, upon my face.

    .....And when our lips touch, I want to feel I can fly.
    That last kiss that I thought it would be the start.
    Is something easy,
    It was something fun.

    But now it is me who can't deny.
    All this flowers that grow inside me, are from you.
    It is love. It is your love that helps to see me through.

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    Pemberley Winter
    I know what you are..you're gonna be bad for my bussiness..I can realize that.
    Última edición por Pemberley Winter; 04/07/2010 a las 16:31

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    Nicolle
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    Painful feelings cause the person is not around, not near, and all we have is the thoughts and all we can do is remember the perfect moments of love and passion.

    Sad but romantic. Beautiful creation.

    Stars, hugs and kisses from Peru!

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    Painful feelings cause the person is not around, not near, and all we have is the thoughts and all we can do is remember the perfect moments of love and passion.

    Sad but romantic. Beautiful creation.

    Stars, hugs and kisses from Peru!
    Thanks Nicolle, you were completly right in your interpretation.....I still haven't got the solution though. Thank you so much for being here.
    Love, Pemb

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    Cita por Pemberley Winter Ver Mensaje
    It was like a rush.
    It's like I can not remember that.
    The image is not so clear now.
    I miss seeing you in the darkness of night.

    Was I a fool?. Shall I fall for you?.
    I let you enter to my heart....
    'cause i thought you'd take care of it.

    It was quick, a moment of passion.
    The smiling in our faces were bright.
    But now...it's this empty space..something without sense.
    Where should I stand now?

    Feeling you so close, but still so far.
    I'm able to look but not to touch.

    I want that moment again.
    I want to see you standing there,
    To feel your hands, upon my face.

    .....And when our lips touch, I want to feel I can fly.
    That last kiss that I thought it would be the start.
    Is something easy,
    It was something fun.

    But now it is me who can't deny.
    All this flowers that grow inside me, are from you.
    It is love. It is your love that helps to see me through.

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    Pemberley Winter
    I know what you are..you're gonna be bad for my bussiness..I can realize that.





    Beautiful poem.

    As I was reading your comment about Nicolle's
    I started to analize the situation.

    I think there's no solution
    because there's no problem.

    You loved
    and that's the most important thing here.

    I once heard that
    Love is the only game
    in which doesn't matter if we win,
    the important thing is to play it.



    Stars for your writting, Pemberly.



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    Redwing
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    One thing is to be fisically close and the other one is to be emotianlly close. Your poem said something like that or at least that's what i thought in some part, i don't know, but i cant tell that when you fall in love... the most important thing is to be both emotionally close...

    Beautiful poem pemb, it's always a pleasure to read you even when you seems to be romantic at the begining and melancholic at the ending.

    Hugs for you.

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    Beautiful poem.

    As I was reading your comment about Nicolle's
    I started to analize the situation.

    I think there's no solution
    because there's no problem.

    You loved
    and that's the most important thing here.

    I once heard that
    Love is the only game
    in which doesn't matter if we win,
    the important thing is to play it.



    Stars for your writting, Pemberly.



    __________________________________________________ LEO





    Thank you smileater for passing by, I really appreciated....and I understand what you mean...but think this: It's important to play...you already said that...but what If we played and now we are suffering?..is the pain worth it?.....
    hugs for you. pemb

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    Cita por Redwing Ver Mensaje
    One thing is to be fisically close and the other one is to be emotianlly close. Your poem said something like that or at least that's what i thought in some part, i don't know, but i cant tell that when you fall in love... the most important thing is to be both emotionally close...

    Beautiful poem pemb, it's always a pleasure to read you even when you seems to be romantic at the begining and melancholic at the ending.

    Hugs for you.
    Thank you my redwingggggg for always being here, I couldn't be more grateful. And yes....everything must be in the emotionally side, but we sometimes can show emotionally stuff.....with physical things....(And I'm not talking about sex only XD).
    Pleasure to have you. Hugs, Pembyyyyy

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    Thank you smileater for passing by, I really appreciated....and I understand what you mean...but think this: It's important to play...you already said that...but what If we played and now we are suffering?..is the pain worth it?.....
    hugs for you. pemb




    It worths it, Pemberly. I always try to keep in mind that what comes easily, goes easily too; thus
    which comes with pain, suffering or problems, hardly goes or it never does.

    My friend Teresa used to say: "I have found the paradox that if I love until it hurts, then there is no hurt, but only more love".



    A hug for you.




    __________________________________________________ LEO




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    It worths it, Pemberly. I always try to keep in mind that what comes easily, goes easily too; thus
    which comes with pain, suffering or problems, hardly goes or it never does.

    My friend Teresa used to say: "I have found the paradox that if I love until it hurts, then there is no hurt, but only more love".



    A hug for you.




    __________________________________________________ LEO




    Hello!, I really appreciate your words, and Teresa's wisdom. She is right, but you know, I won't deny that sometimes pain makes us weaker or there's the posibility that sometimes pain makes us remember that love was real.
    Hugs For u.
    Pemb.

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    Hello!, I really appreciate your words, and Teresa's wisdom. She is right, but you know, I won't deny that sometimes pain makes us weaker or there's the posibility that sometimes pain makes us remember that love was real.
    Hugs For u.
    Pemb.



    Of course! By the way, My friend Teresa used to live in Calcuta.





    She surely gives good advice.



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