Dream about you

**Jorge Serra C** · 12/07/2010, 14:58

Last night in my dreams,
We were sitting on the floor.
The moon was talking about love
and I was thinking in your lips.

I see the colour of your wings,
Which climb me to the sky ,
and show me the shape of a kiss.

You were closed to my hand,
while I was nearest to your soul.

You moved your body like a string,
while I tried to play music in your hips.

Last night in my dreams,
you stole my heart at least,
and suddenly.......I wake up,
besides your soul.

**cenicienta02** · 18/07/2010, 21:27

que sueño jejeje

un gusto pasar por tus letras

**Mary C. López** · 18/07/2010, 22:05

Excellent, I enjoyed your lines... Kisses.

**D347H** · 23/07/2010, 12:37

Gorgeous rhythm!!
A placer to read your poem.
Regards, glory and stars for you.

**Jorge Serra C** · 26/07/2010, 14:43

Hello d347h, gracias pot tu comentario , me alegra que te hay gustado el poema, best regards too.

**lluviadeabril** · 22/08/2010, 14:15

Great poem Jorge.

It can be viewed in so many different ways. The ending is simply beautiful.
Company that never leaves, dwells in the deepest parts of dreams and brings you closer from within.

Thanks for sharing,

A hug and a kiss.

**Jorge Serra C** · 25/08/2010, 10:20

Hello gracias por tu comentario lluvia de abril , aunque debi hacerlo un poco mas largo.a kiss

**CristR** · 31/08/2010, 20:22

I have no words, and that is not very often on me...the rhyme is just beautiful and the armony is practicly flawless i like it a lot, lovely poem direct from the heart... congrats jorge!!!