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I am walking through you.

Poema titulado I am walking through you. en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; I find my way with you, You are the centre of the earth You are someone I must not forget. ...

Tema: I am walking through you.

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    18 oct, 09
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    Predeterminado I am walking through you.

    I find my way with you,
    You are the centre of the earth
    You are someone I must not forget.

    Wind can't blow my love away.
    You are my soul, and that will always stay.

    These are facts, there is no other chance.
    This is life, and this is how we love.

    This is my home, It will always be near.
    I know where I must go, I know you are the road.

    I am walking through you, with no regret,
    'cause this safe road, will never end.
    It will stay, like you and me.
    In a fairytale.

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    Pemberley Winter
    I know what you are..you're gonna be bad for my bussiness...I can realize that.

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    Redwing
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    Predeterminado Re: I am walking through you.

    you see? love, i wasnt' wrong dear, and even with the absentism... i liked your return, specially the ending part, it's very deep and tender without being corny and well the rest of the poem... what do i have to do to be able to write something as soft and beautiful as you do?¬¬ i'll some day find an answr and then... I WILL CONQUER THE WORLD jojojo... sorry, wrong line XD.

    Hey pemb, it's been a pleasure as always, keep it up!!!

    Hugs for you honey.

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Cita por Redwing Ver Mensaje
    you see? love, i wasnt' wrong dear, and even with the absentism... i liked your return, specially the ending part, it's very deep and tender without being corny and well the rest of the poem... what do i have to do to be able to write something as soft and beautiful as you do?¬¬ i'll some day find an answr and then... I WILL CONQUER THE WORLD jojojo... sorry, wrong line XD.

    Hey pemb, it's been a pleasure as always, keep it up!!!

    Hugs for you honey.
    yayyyyyyyyyy, I knew I see you here!!, thank u sooo much. And I guess you were kinda correct with the love thing..and I'm sure you can write something even more beautiful. SO I'M CHEERING FOR YOU!!!! ;)
    I'll see you here, and I hope that I could see you at the top of the world hahahah.
    hugs!!, pemb

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