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He Can Only Hold Her

Poema titulado He Can Only Hold Her en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; HE CAN ONLY HOLD HER He is the one who can only hold her, She doesn't care if he is ...

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    HE CAN ONLY HOLD HER

    He is the one who can only hold her,
    She doesn't care if he is good or bad, she knows he is the one.
    "Look after yourself"- someone said to her.
    She was afraid, no one wanted to stay.

    But then he arrived, shining, shy, absolutley bright.
    He was perfect, he was the only one who could stay.
    Holding her so close, (yeah...she wouldn't run away).

    This was the time, everything was a great start.
    Grey clouds went white. Love was decided to stay.

    She never thought someone could,
    She never thought this could be true.
    But he was different, however it was hard to believe.
    He was only good, with someone so happy like her.

    They, together, they made one.
    They make one person...that everyone would desire.

    They were there, shining like a star.
    She knew she was right.
    He can only hold her, he was his master.
    Master of love.

    She was put back together now,
    she can't be break again.
    She was gleeful to see, someone who cared about herself.

    He can only hold her,
    and he knows it too.
    He is proud of what he has done,
    he is proud for having the one.

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    Pemberley Winter
    I know what you are..you're gonna be bad for my bussiness...I can realize that.
    Última edición por Pemberley Winter; 14/10/2010 a las 21:15

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    Redwing
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    A perfect love story you gave us.

    I enjoyed every single word of it, and to tell you the truth... this is now my favourite one from you.

    Sorry if i have no better words to describe what i think about this great poem, but i'll tell you something: Reading this has been the best part of my day, so i'm pretty happy now.

    Thanks for the peaceful moment.

    Hugs for you dear.

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Cita por Redwing Ver Mensaje
    A perfect love story you gave us.

    I enjoyed every single word of it, and to tell you the truth... this is now my favourite one from you.

    Sorry if i have no better words to describe what i think about this great poem, but i'll tell you something: Reading this has been the best part of my day, so i'm pretty happy now.

    Thanks for the peaceful moment.

    Hugs for you dear.
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWW REDWING!, that was really really sweet of you, and to be honest...I said this to Ramiro too...I really enjoyed doing it too. I felt very happy and excited...I loved every word, every meaning, everything......it is amazing..I'm really proud of myself (?) jajjajajajaja.
    really your favourite? hahahha. I'm glad I was the smile of your day ;)
    hugs for you friendd ...OHH I want to read sth from youuu!!.
    love, Pemby.,

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