Poema titulado A whisper en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; A thought deferred in silence a touch waits in midair a step to rest, to taste the warmness of your ...
A whisper A thought deferred in silencea touch waits in midaira step to rest, to taste
the warmness of your lips.
A feeling left to growa finger on your nosedesire, melting snow.
A whisper breaks in silencethe rustle of the sheets,me falling on your skin.
Escribir lo que sientes, no es lo mismo que sentir lo que escribes -scg.
Re: A whisper O.o i have lots of images right now, and somehow... i think they're not truly told on your poem... ok... it's kinda tender and soft, beautifuli writen, :s it's not fair, why do write so wow while i can not even write ?¬¬ i'll kil you by hugging you April, now i'm jealous of your talent.
I liked it, the way you express and paint images while saying almost nothing... it's amazing how you write.
A pleasure my next murder victim XD.
Hugs for yeh!
Re: A whisper Aawee… Redwing what a wonderful comment. You spoil me my friend. This is the way I think about it: Judging by your writing (English or Spanish), the imagery you summon will always be more beautiful than anything I can put into words – You are truly talented.
And, if I may think I read you correctly, I sense in your poems that -- although you don’t necessarily like to wear it as a cufflink -- you are one of the most sensitive writers I have the pleasure of reading..
Thanks for flattering me into thinking I can write.
Warm hugs.
P.S. One of these days we will have to swap stories about our nicks. Every time I read yours, I think of one of my favorite hockey teams
Escribir lo que sientes, no es lo mismo que sentir lo que escribes -scg.
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