Just thanks (to my friend)

**lluviadeabril** · 12/05/2011, 23:55

A friend in the distance

so close, a thought away.

A line, a verse in May

a measly, measly thanks

for each of your kind ways.

You are a candid and kind heart

a voice that sings, a hymn

and every once is a while

that blush expressed in modesty.

Your smile is effortless in depth

and it should humble me to know

to know, that you are my friend.

Instead, I am proud as proud can be

to have your words as company.

Regrettably my friend

I am an imperfect being

and I must let you know

that goodbyes I can’t hear.

You can write them in the sand

or in the air for me to see, but

I would surely miss

your halo and its tweak.

You’re a friend in the distance

yet close, a click away,

your Wings are strong and Red

¡Yes, yes, my arm I give to twist

you’re tough, I must I admit!

I hate to break it to you though,

that smile I must upset

your soul comes through the text

it’s bright as bright can be

a pair of wings that soars the skies

and everyone can see.

**Pemberley Winter** · 13/05/2011, 20:44

GO REDWINGGGGGGGG. this is was so sweet and tenderr!!. Congrats you've made a wonderful poem about a wonderful person as Redwing Is. I loved every word of itt. Love you bothhhhh

Redwing · 14/05/2011, 04:06

Ok... now I'm blushing >.<

I'm honored and kinda confused because i don't know what to tell you about this April, i enjoyed the whole poem even thought i think you're giving me more credit than it truly is XD. To tell you the truth... i'm happy by having you as a friend because i think of you as someone truly kind and interesting (watch that brain of yours or else i'll borrow it without advice) and somehow, even that i don't know too much from you... i simply like to have you close with all of your points of view and your awesomly brilliant writings.

About the poem... Says there that you are an imperfect being... that's true, but hey, no one is perfect,besides, i'm against perfection, let's leave perfection for the boring ones ;), i'm just glad you're just like that.

Goodbyes you can't hear? that makes me think about two ways:

1)Are you leaving and that's the reason why you said "i would surely miss your halo and its tweak"? ¬¬ Ok, if fer some reason you would someday leave... you have to forcefully tell me, because you don't like to hear goodbyes, but i also don't like to lose my people, and yes, you are one of my comrades, friends, family, psichiatric partner, or however you want to call us ¬¬ so if that's the case... i'll bite you ¬¬

2)If you don't like to hear goodbyes... relax, i'm planning on to stay for a reaaaally long time =).

You're also right at the part about being at only one click of distance, so, it means i'll always be here for you my friend.

Thanks for the poem and your friendship, i enjoyed the last but still enjoy the first of both.

Hugs fer yeh April godess rain and a bunch different colored flavored kisses.

P.D. Pemby loves us both? O.o ok... love is in Babel, everywhere i look around XD, nah, tell her i also love you both. Oh and sorry for beaing late April.

:-*

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