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The Dark

Poema titulado The Dark en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; It is the way it seems Only by chance you can perhaps defeated it. It can follow you everywhere It ...

Tema: The Dark

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    18 oct, 09
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    Predeterminado The Dark

    It is the way it seems
    Only by chance you can perhaps defeated it.
    It can follow you everywhere
    It can guide you to hell.


    Try to run, try to leave.
    Is late, you'll never be free.
    Keep asking why this is happening to you.
    You are the chosen one.
    The fate has picked you.


    Your most awful dreams come back,
    your shadows are gathering around.
    Hesitating to find a solution or just to let go.
    Yes, it's approaching, (watch out!),yes, it is close.


    Sink into it, die now.
    Believe me, you'll never survive.


    "Ubit sunt" is right, you know you'll ended up like that
    But you know is bad, when you don't go to "the above."

    You're not ready for the limbo, yes..you'll die, but not going there at all.
    Try to escape...'cause..well...you're going at the bottom of this page.
    You are going down..yes..you are going to the dark.


    Try to run, try to leave.
    Is late, you'll never be free.
    Keep asking why this is happening to you.
    You are the chosen one.
    The fate has picked you.


    Sweetest child of mine, you'll never come back,
    But for me is not a pity at all,
    I'm loving this moment, so please...
    Please..just go.


    Copyrights Reserved

    Pemberley Winter
    I Know what you are..you're gonna be bad for my bussines..I can realize that.

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    Redwing
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    Predeterminado Re: The Dark

    Holy mother of god! and i'm the one who's dark and weird? O.o come on, this sound cool and somehow funny...can i go to the dark? mmm... it makes me think of it as some kind of song... and yet, it gives me some adult thoughts XD never mind.

    Enjoyed, it was crazy, i liked it and still want to go to the dark ¬¬ tell me whereeeee cause i can only find absence of light, but not the true darkness itself.

    Hugs miss pemby twisted dark winter of the shadows XD

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Cita por Redwing Ver Mensaje
    Holy mother of god! and i'm the one who's dark and weird? O.o come on, this sound cool and somehow funny...can i go to the dark? mmm... it makes me think of it as some kind of song... and yet, it gives me some adult thoughts XD never mind.

    Enjoyed, it was crazy, i liked it and still want to go to the dark ¬¬ tell me whereeeee cause i can only find absence of light, but not the true darkness itself.

    Hugs miss pemby twisted dark winter of the shadows XD
    My Redwing a.k.a Darkwing hahahaha "holy mother of god". To be honest..I thought of you doing this, I knew you'll say something like that. So It is not a surprise to see your response. Yes. DARKNESS! Pretty interesting theme you know? I've always made sad things and so on..but I guess I neevr had the opportunity to do something like this. So...I enjoyed it too. Adult stuff?..hahahahah mmm perhaps... I shall tell you sth: I recorded my voice reading it..in fact. in the part it says ""yes it is close", I say it whispering...and I like the way it sounds...I wanted to put it on the forum of Los poemas recitados or sth like that..you know..you can read your own poem...but I'm such a dumb and I don't know how to do it hahahhaah...it is a pity...'cause I like the way it sounds. But it is already here. If you like, I could send you my voice so you can hear me reading it, leemme know.. Ok...I'm glaaaaaad to see you hereee! and yes..you'll always be darker than me..don't get jealous. And believe me...you shouldn't go to the dark...'cause you'll never survive. ;)
    tons of hugssssss.
    Pemb "Dark and Twisty" Winter.

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    Poeta activo Winterfairy será famoso muy prontoWinterfairy será famoso muy pronto Avatar de Winterfairy
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    20 sep, 08
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    Predeterminado Re: Respuesta: Re: The Dark

    Hi Pem,

    This is truly a dark and lovely poem at the same time. I really, really love it...darkness does sound interesting.

    Love,
    Winter

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    Poeta adicto al portal DEJAVU va por un camino distinguido Avatar de DEJAVU
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    Predeterminado Re: The Dark

    Good write, has a lot of images. I can see in your writing that English is not your first language but it is definitely good work. Cheers

    Mis Reconocimientos Poéticos

    Que la poesía es vicio? Quien dijo eso? Sírvanse.

    Greg H. / Goyo Melendez / DEJAVU

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Cita por Winterfairy Ver Mensaje
    Hi Pem,

    This is truly a dark and lovely poem at the same time. I really, really love it...darkness does sound interesting.

    Love,
    Winter
    Yes it sounds indeed! People tend to describe it as dangerous..and yes...of course it is..though sometimes, is the best place you could have ever gone ;)

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Predeterminado Respuesta: Re: The Dark

    Cita por DEJAVU Ver Mensaje
    Good write, has a lot of images. I can see in your writing that English is not your first language but it is definitely good work. Cheers
    Thank you so much for stepping by. it's an honour.
    Have a nice day, Pemb

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