Poema titulado Creation. en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; Creation. And I was there at that day when we made love and parted half. The earth was made from ...
Creation.
Creation.
And I was there at that day
when we made love and parted half.
The earth was made from flesh,
the purity of souls became the sky.
And I was there at that day,
staring at your wounds and offering a coat,
filling and warming your insides,
giving a new life to make for both.
You dropped a kiss and made it water,
the rain came down and fertilized our love.
I made an oath and then it happened,
we had a son and life begun.
I was there and felt its walking,
you were there and heard his words.
We both shook as we were happy,
he was there, the product of our love.
I remember your eyes beneath the shadows,
the blinking lights so cast and pure,
and I ,well aware of my condition,
I collided and we made love.
The inexistent became existence,
we made a conscious and developed a soul.
Then with our heart exposed and in the distance…
We made a container, a soul carrier of our love.
And I was there when all that happened,
I was there and held you close,
but then again we reached the silence…
And I was there when we made love and life begun.
-Creation-
Última edición por Starlight; 26/09/2011 a las 21:02
Re: Creation. Me sobrepasa... en el mejor de los sentidos. Esto es imaginación en estado puro, purísimo deambular encaminado al abismo de los cotidianos quehaceres.
Glubsssss.










Respuesta: Creation. Aweeeee, this was sooo sweet. I like the way you talk about your creation and the way you love that girl. Because if it wasn't for the love you feel, you wouldn't be writing this or at least creating something. good job
hugs, Pemb
Re: Respuesta: Creation. Yeah, I know you think I'm god and I like to talk about "my" creation, but what I can't understand in here is... the way I love that girl? O.o sorry pemby, but I can't find the presence of a girl between the unexistence and the existence on itself... at least not before they collided and created... Yes, life it is XD.
Jojo, now you're the one that is mistaken miss pemby, 'cause this poem... wasn't meant for a girl or a relation, it was meant to be exactly what it seems, a poem about our own creation (or if I'm god as i think you thought... it would be your creation Xd) Jo, yo said i was creative... but not that kind of a creative to give a name and providing diappers an food XD.
Kisses pemb... and don't missunderstand, I'm not aiming to become a real romantic yet XD.
Hugs and hugs until you get purple and cannot breathe.
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