Tema: If something ends.

If something should end now.
Let it be.
I don't care, I only need to feel you holding me tight.

Something can crash down. I wouldn't care.
There's no time, no tomorrow, nothing.

We are together, freeze. Together, forever.

I need you, I love you.. I know you'll stay.

If something should be done, make it.
But no rush, do it. No time, feel it.

I'm with you, . I feel your beat.
I feel us. Forever, for eternity. For life.


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Pemberley Winter

If something ends... I guess that when the time comes there's nothing left to be done understand but to finish, excuses are unaxeptable... and it's better to stop if until it hurts most... But still your poem confuses me because you're speaking as if you'll wait or as if he'll never goes and i just can't quite understand the human being... it gives the impresion of tranquility but still some pain while the love stands but not frozen, just waiting.

Good to see you pemby...

Hugs.

por Starlight

If something ends... I guess that when the time comes there's nothing left to be done understand but to finish, excuses are unaxeptable... and it's better to stop if until it hurts most... But still your poem confuses me because you're speaking as if you'll wait or as if he'll never goes and i just can't quite understand the human being... it gives the impresion of tranquility but still some pain while the love stands but not frozen, just waiting.

Good to see you pemby...

Hugs.

I think that the poem talks about estactic time. I mean, I tried to talk about a very-much-in-love couple, that, to be honest, It's very young. But young in thought, because they think that they can face the whole world, they can beat any dark forces. VERY NAIVE. It is a combination of many sensations and the one I love the most: RUSH.
I hate this love, 'cause I know it's quite impossible. I mean...trying to forget about everything else, be disposed to the world's fate......not for me. Pretty much of a lie.

hugs for you, Pemb

por amormejia

With writing like yours, I think nothing is ending. It's a great poem, loaded with feelings and strenght. My sincere congratulations.

That was really sweet Amorrmejia!, I really appreciate your comment and you for being here. Tons of kisses.
Pemb