Tema: Where light and dark don't exist

Bueno, pues este es mi primera publicación en inglés y segunda en el foro, sacado de una canción escrita para mi grupo , poco a poco iré escogiendo partes de otras canciones que haya escrito, a ver que os parecen... Comentad a ser posible, ya sea bueno o malo el comentario

There are no good or evil,
silence is the only sound.
Nothingness, no land or sky
where light and dark don't exist.

For the rest of days and nights I'll stay
in the blackest deepness,
catched by the time's iron fist
where light and dark don't exist.

Trapped in my mind's dark well,
lost in my own astral plane.
I found the Long Stream's end
where light and dark don't exist.

Oh, time, ancient father of death and life,
you catched me with your wings for all the eternity,
I'll never be born or die again, I closed my eyes
where light and dark don't exist.

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