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Shattered.

Poema titulado Shattered. en la sección LA TORRE DE BABEL , de la categoría Tu Mundo Literario :: Publicar Poesía en VERSO; Shattered. Here I await for the last one kiss, one last beat until goodbye, the final touch upon our lips… ...

Tema: Shattered.

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    Poeta activo Starlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillante Avatar de Starlight
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    Predeterminado Shattered.

    Shattered.

    Here I await for the last one kiss,
    one last beat until goodbye,
    the final touch upon our lips…
    the last plea ‘til left behind.

    A gaping wound will mourn over,
    a broken heart will remain in cold,
    a silent voice will come to shackle,
    my body entire will fall to dust.

    Shattered into pieces I will sing,
    a song for love, a song for me,
    the ballad of the broken lovers,
    a hymn of those for not repeat.

    Trembling words will cover distance,
    a forbidden love remained unsaid,
    then the world will come to existence…
    the saddest face to show me late.

    Burn me now and turn to ashes,
    dance with me on shattered floor,
    then with a smile of holy darkness…
    kiss my lips, hold me close and let me go.

    -Shattered-

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    Poeta asiduo al portal Pemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradablePemberley Winter es simplemente muy agradable Avatar de Pemberley Winter
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    Predeterminado Respuesta: Shattered.

    I think someome it's back...yay!! where the hell have you been? I've been feeling so left out and alone. I honestly thought that neither you or april rain would come back. I hated that idea!
    Anyway, now..the poem.
    Liked it liked it liked it very much. I mean...the sad theme and everything, is not a new thing for you. But I really could imagine you as dust..like..seriously..I don't know how that image appeared on my head. For the record...I do know and I have experience of love that destroy us...it leave us hopeless, alone, miserable. But you have to let it go...not you...the love. It might come again. I ABSOLUTLEY LOVED THE PART OF THE "HYMN OF THOSE FOR NOT REPEAT". That was cool. A hymn of "the unloved" would be a good idea.
    It was nice to see you again.
    love love love love mr.
    Pemb

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    Poeta activo Starlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillante Avatar de Starlight
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    Predeterminado Re: Respuesta: Shattered.

    Cita por Pemberley Winter Ver Mensaje
    I think someome it's back...yay!! where the hell have you been? I've been feeling so left out and alone. I honestly thought that neither you or april rain would come back. I hated that idea!
    Anyway, now..the poem.
    Liked it liked it liked it very much. I mean...the sad theme and everything, is not a new thing for you. But I really could imagine you as dust..like..seriously..I don't know how that image appeared on my head. For the record...I do know and I have experience of love that destroy us...it leave us hopeless, alone, miserable. But you have to let it go...not you...the love. It might come again. I ABSOLUTLEY LOVED THE PART OF THE "HYMN OF THOSE FOR NOT REPEAT". That was cool. A hymn of "the unloved" would be a good idea.
    It was nice to see you again.
    love love love love mr.
    Pemb
    Well i've been... emm... first i found a job, then i became adicted to it, suddenly i me5t a girl... then i was adicted to both and forgot how to write, but lately... i lost the job and so one of the adictions... which means i have more time and besides... i missed to write and also i missed some people like you and april... and of course, it will take a while until i can write the way i used to, but i'll try y best for not to be lost again... and no, i kept looking for you both, i just had nothing to share.

    About the comment:Yeah, it's sad but at my still with an hymn XD, (yeah, i can forget how to write, but i'll never forget how to piss off the world XD) and yes, IT'S GREAT TO SEE YOU... god, i missed you, i also thought you and april had just vanished... i guess that probes we, here at babel, are more than just uknown people sharing stuff... i' gald to have you both as friends...

    I'm stopping myself at that since i don't want to get too emotional.

    Thanks for appearing miss... hugs and kisses for you, a lot for every day we haven't met. ;)

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    Miembro del jurado. MODERADORA GLOBAL EN PROSA.
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    Predeterminado Re: Shattered.

    Heal wounds do not come will come times mejores.ABRAZOS abajo.ya

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    Poeta activo Starlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillanteStarlight tiene un futuro brillante Avatar de Starlight
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    Predeterminado Re: Shattered.

    Cita por ROSA Ver Mensaje
    Heal wounds do not come will come times mejores.ABRAZOS abajo.ya
    Thanks for the reading and yes... better times will come to heal my wounds.

    Hugs.

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