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La Torre de BabelDesde los principios de la historia, el hombre se tuvo que comunicar en diferentes lenguas. Por eso, este foro te permitirá conocer y publicar poemas en idiomas diferentes al español.
La Torre de BabelDiscutiendo poema The Secret en el foro La Torre de Babel; [center:cc12c6569f]Held in depths of some lagoon
awaits unseen, hidden, shadowed;
as a secret, of arcane date,
as bright as the sun,
as old as the moon.
A dafodill, finicky for light;
a blossoming song
that petals shall sing;
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The Secret
[center:cc12c6569f]Held in depths of some lagoon
awaits unseen, hidden, shadowed;
as a secret, of arcane date,
as bright as the sun,
as old as the moon.
A dafodill, finicky for light;
a blossoming song
that petals shall sing;
for immortality,
under water, under eyes.
It's a treasure
guarded by beast,
as witty as goblins,
as ferocious as a lion.
It's a secret,
that remains hidden.
Only one, that keeps useen.[/center:cc12c6569f]
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It’s no secret that you posses a talent for writing. You have managed to form an array of colors and imagery key ingredients for a good poem. I always admire anyone who makes an effort to write in English even though it’s not their native language, congratulations. This poem is better written than the last one.
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Danke Freund...
Thank you for your commentary...
And I always have mistakes, because I oscillate from a language to another (I know english, french and german, besides of spanish)... and it's very common to see me messing things up...
Auf Wiedersehen, merci encore...
Nicolai
Danke Freund...
Thank you for your commentary...
And I always have mistakes, because I oscillate from a language to another (I know english, french and german, besides of spanish)... and it's very common to see me messing things up...
Auf Wiedersehen, merci encore...
Nicolai
Well in that case the more to congragulate you in your accomplishments... :D
I speek some enghish a bit of spanish and even smaller dose of french... :cry:
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I't était parce que nous avons voulu regarder le modèle de cru, car ma soeur a conçu un collage des images de famille, et elle a voulu un comme cela...
Rien triste en particulier, ne s'inquiètent...
Au revoir,
Nicolai
"Es criminal quien sonríe al crimen;
quien lo ve y no lo ataca;
quien se sienta a su mesa;
quien se sienta a la mesa
de los que se codean con él
o le sacan el sombrero interesado;
quienes reciben de él el permiso de vivir."
-José Martí-
Nicolai 
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