Daylight Thought

The crack of down exacerbates…
The valleys of sadness erupt
over the vast and spoiled product
from malice of secret inmates.

A distorted image blinds from afar
the flesh utterly suffocates
embraces in a dance that eliminates
doubtful thoughts that once were ajar.

Seeking refuge, calluses rupture
bloody hands make rivers of stars
dusting souls that once were sparks
over the path of an endless departure.

The morning dew fools for a hot day
hiding infernos deep in its core
purgatory essence that wants to score
the winning run with highest pay.

The fate of all humans is looked with dismay
hands from the heartland feed
the outrages and common need
[SIZE=3]of innocent victims that cry and pray. [/SIZE]

[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Lets not forget for a minute, we say [/SIZE]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]those once forgotten [/SIZE]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]the ones that got rotten [/SIZE]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]from guilt of those who don’t pay. [/SIZE]

[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Lets not leave with broken hearts[/SIZE]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]lets not freeze in artic dreams [/SIZE]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]lets not die waiting for springs [/SIZE]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Times New Roman]lets stop hoping… it’s here where future starts. [/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Times New Roman][/font][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT]

 

it's such a beautiful thing that you have the chance of leave your feelings in this language, even is the same, some words take a different way more deeply.

happy christmas for you.

 

Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving me your comment. For me, writing in English is a bit of a challenge, but nonetheless is worth the try. Thanks again.

 

Aunque no se mucho inglés, te dire que me pareció muy interesante y muy triste a la vez, más por esta frase que me helo el alma.

of innocent victims that cry and pray.

Todo un placer recorrer tus versos.
Un abrazo y estrellas desde mi bella tierra.

 

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"AmorMejia"
I agree with you and add: Not only the future starts here but the future has already started now, and [U]now [/U]is only what we have to worry about. I liked your poem. I interpret it like painstaking principles turned into poetry. A poem with perfect rhymes, something difficult to find in the present poetry. Congratulations.
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Ramiro,
I'm very pleased with your comment. My English poetry is not the best, but I do try to work on it. Thanks so much for stopping and leaving your comment. May this season brings you the best. Thanks again.

 

Pues entendiste lo suficiente amiga. It's very nice to find you on my humble English poem. Thanks so much for stopping by. :::hug:::

 

Muy buen poema, me encanto como envuelves imagenes
en especial, el rocio de la mañana esconde el infierno.....

un placer leerte, saludos desde mis verde campos...

 

Muchisimas gracias Eudes. It's a great honor to have you in my lines.