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Savange

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por UnusualSoul, 19 de Mayo de 2020. Respuestas: 7 | Visitas: 459

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    One bet like Sex in las Vegas with Lexi Belle
    Taboo when I spook all this fools with a Bell Ringer
    Ya'll were jerking to the flu just like maniacs then
    Ya mamma came to ya room just to look at Bellringer

    I see those bastards in public they're moving disgusted
    I fed my monster with honey ya'll mustard on my teeth
    I haven't lost it, I have a kid inside to trust in
    Brains are polluted they flow like a dick in the ass bitch

    Rapping my crap out of Auswitz for you to be almighty
    Fill up the rank list living reckless
    Got rockless paper nest, afford this highly cyphered text
    Ya'll hoes being in my balls for way too long to don't cum wax

    I'm not anyone you can compare to but neutral is natural
    Walk psychotic on lava whole naked and barefoot
    I better send food up from this bookrest
    Your null sense is losing to death and the breath shoots "Ey You"

    You nuisances find new senses few sensors
    Fewer answers from our lovely living cancer
    Reading dancers in Savant see loops in a mirror
    Get Stendhal stand at my cerumen museum
    Uranium? U're-anus

    I'm a ray beam melting sun finding fun in raining
    Drops fall in my aura suddenly for bathing
    I'm not Neil Horan but a star indeed as far I can see
    You know you also are but missed it in a blink

    Now go and catch a wish I'm not captain wiz
    Now go caption this and try to find the tic to catch the wiz
    Fatuous featus pictures are for someone cause for jizz
    Swear I get that sleash I'mmonna unseathe my secret steel

    Unleash a beast so I can blast every scapegoat
    Find a escape road or a state coat I stay close
    Hate deserves my eyes so it can shine and face zoom
    A long ago I seeked a war to win again and stay cool

    1712
     
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    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    I like the brashness of the poem. The incoherent babble when we attempt to empty out our minds not really saying anything, but at the same time saying it all. You did an excellent job. Two questions, sanvage—or ---savage? (typo perhaps) and ya’ll or y’all??
     
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    I couldn't have described it in a better way, just let the mind talk without getting conclusions. It is y'all yeah I know my lyrics ain't grammatically perfect, thanks. Savange is a mixture between Savant and Savage, Savant is a very rare syndrom that makes you perceive the world in a very unique way, which I compare to my own insidious reality. Thanks Guadalupe hI appreciate how you make me open myself.
     
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  4. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    Hey, you inspired me to write something so I am about to post it...Yes and I saw the effect of the savant, I think I knew someone like that once...Cool Savange -- proper name, no shame in that, love it...thanks for the explanation...I like your style.

    Hugs and kisses from the Lone State of Texas
     
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    I'm Glad I could inspire you girl. Hugs for you and make sure you send me your poem. Big hugs from Soria and thank you so much.
     
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    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    Yes exactly, just let everything flow...I get it, well my poem is in just below yours here I think...

    I like your style

    XOXOX (Where is Soria???)
     
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  7. This nonsense you had just spew reminded me of my self, with my long trips to 8th street in Detroit
    a while ago, to watch Eminem and a bunch of fools duke it out with rubbished words and some times
    even fist fights like savants. jeje
    thanks for lighting up this hall...
     
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    Hahaha hey man, what can I say, I like Eminem, sometimes a harmed heart has to set the world in flames. I don't like fights by the way, they just destroy even more the world, that's why sometimes you just have to let it flow and use your mind and voice and not your fists. Big hug again pal.
     
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