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Luceo non uro

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Prochnost, 19 de Junio de 2020. Respuestas: 9 | Visitas: 703

  1. Prochnost

    Prochnost Matt

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    I miss you when you are the closest
    like a little memory inside my heart
    that time will never erase.
    And/when/even if my feelings fade
    I will always have this scar,
    painful, constant reminder
    of a love that once was true.

    Many birthdays shall be gone.
    An empty seat in a crowded table.
    A sweet voice in a thundering roar
    That I’ve always waited for
    But it’s never there.

    Yet within, deeply rooted,
    I enshroud a blind faith.
    The cold concealment of utter hope;
    shattered, shrunken, yes, but hope.
     
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  2. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    I know about those scars and how the pain seems to linger even when we try to walk away from it.

    XOXOX
     
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  3. Prochnost

    Prochnost Matt

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    Thank you for reading my poem, hopefully it shall pass by giving it some time to heal. Feliz viernes!
     
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  4. Alizée

    Alizée ⊙ Humαlıen ⊙ ༻✦༺ ♡ Måᥒᥱskιᥒ ♡ ∞ ֎

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    Dear Poet @Prochnost :
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    I like the poem, from its Latin name to its meaning...

    IMO: A scar made by true love will always be beautiful

    It's the essential reminder that you know how to love, that you have loved and that you are capable of loving again.
    It's much more than some people can or can't do. I miss you and you haven't left yet because I know when you come back you won't be the same
    and I know I'll miss the one you've already been because he'll never come back

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    Thank you very much for sharing your art
    I congratulate you
     
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  5. En mis noches de bohemia...
    So you are too one us uh?
    wondering in the boulevard of broken dreams.

    it seems more like infatuation.
    nice thoughts
     
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  6. Prochnost

    Prochnost Matt

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    Thank you, like always my old friend for stopping by and reading my humble poem. Your comments shall always inspire me to write more often. Keep shining, Lune, for those in the dark.
    Kindly yours,
    Matt.
     
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    Prochnost Matt

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    Dear poet,
    You lost me there. Infatuation, boulevard of broken dreams... I haven’t mentioned that at all in this poem. Have you, by any chance, clicked mistakenly here?
     
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  8. no. not mistakenly, is not what you mention.. is what I read
     
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  9. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Prochnost,
    a realistic inspiration or more than that,
    an absolute truth about love
    and as we all can read
    a delicacy of words
    precisely as polite,
    yearning at
    it’s best.

    Felicidades,
    Fidel Guerra.
     
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  10. Azalea

    Azalea Invitado

    Melancólico, pero muy hermoso y con un remate esperanzador. Un placer leerte. Prochnost. Saludo cordial.
     
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