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  1. Recently played

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    Los Jueves por la noche duermo en casa de Elena. Los Viernes al amanecer vuelvo la cabeza hacia la ventana y miro el cielo, el contorno de las cortinas y la línea ondulada del valle le dan el aspecto de una concha azul, una concha que va cambiando su tono conforme se deslizan las estaciones. Elena y yo también nos deslizamos, siempre para volver al mismo sitio, siempre para volver al mismo tono de azul.
     
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  2. Eratalia

    Eratalia Con rimas y a lo loco

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    Tu prosa es magnífica. Me gusta.
    Un saludo cordial.
     
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    Eratalia, Aug 5, 2016
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    Muchas gracias Eratalia por tus comentarios. Saludos. :)
     
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    joblam Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Un placer pasar a leer tu magnífico trabajo. Saludos cordiales.
     
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    joblam, Aug 6, 2016
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    Muchas gracias por tan favorable comentario. Saludos.
     
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  6. LUZYABSENTA

    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Tonos suaves mezclados entre formas, amanecer y color.
    felicidades, bellissimo. luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Aug 7, 2016
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    Muchas gracias por pasarte a leer y por tu bello comentario. Un saludo cordial.
     
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    MP Tempus fugit Staff Member ADMINISTRADORA

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    Como dice el refrán: "Lo bueno si breve, dos veces bueno".

    Me gustó muchó y otros temas que te leí también.

    Un saludo
     
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    MP, Sep 3, 2016
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    Muchas gracias Julia ya he visto que te has dado un paseo por mis letras, te lo agradezco enormemente. Recibe un cordial abrazo. Saludos
     
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  10. Antonio del Olmo

    Antonio del Olmo Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    El cielo esa una acogedora concha azul, refleja bien los sentimientos de la pareja.

    Salud y ventura.
     
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    Antonio del Olmo, Sep 4, 2016
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    Gracias Antonio, es genial cuando los demás entienden lo querías reflejar. Un abrazo. Saludos.
     
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  12. Mamen

    Mamen ADMINISTRADORA Staff Member ADMINISTRADORA Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Momentos para recordar,
    los ojos que miran azul,
    siempre habría que soñar,
    cuando se escribe como tú.
    Un placer haber pasado, un saludo.

    Bienevenido a Mundopoesía,
    esperando que siempre seas muy feliz entre nosotros.
     
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    Mamen, Sep 4, 2016
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    Muchas gracias Mamen, un placer que pases por mis letras, celebro que te haya gustado. Gracias por la bienvenida un saludo cordial.
     
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  14. Hannah Alarcón G.

    Hannah Alarcón G. Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Lo que logra el amor cuando están dos en sintonia. Muy bello, saludos.
     
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    Hannah Alarcón G., Sep 7, 2016
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    Gracias Hannah por pasarte, un placer tu visita, un abrazo.
     
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    esthergranados Poeta adicto al portal

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    Qué bonita y qué sutil, me encanta. Felicidades
     
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    esthergranados, Sep 9, 2016
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    Muchas gracias Esther, celebro que te haya gustado. Me alegra tu visita. Saludos
     
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    titiritero Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Brillante. Enhorabuena.
    Saludos, Juan.
    P.D. Creo que te debo alguna respuesta, pero aparte de tacaño ando muy poco por el foro.
     
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    Gracias Juan, un placer tu visita. Un abrazo.
    P.D. las respuestas no se deben, encantado con la tuya.
     
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    Alonso Vicent Poeta veterano en el portal

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    El modo de describir siempre dice mucho, creo que es lo más importante de un relato, y lo que se dice es sólo una parte cuando al lector le abren la facultad de imaginar.
    Esos tonos azules a los que se vuelve añoran un nuevo jueves.
    Estupendo micro.
     
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    Alonso Vicent, Sep 12, 2016
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    Muchas gracias Alonso por tu tiempo y tu amabilidad. Un placer tu visita. Un abrazo.
     
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    Los tonos azules tienen un no sé qué, qué sé yo,
    tienen luz,igual que tus letras.
    Qué bueno, compañero,muy bueno...
     
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    Rosario Martín, Sep 14, 2016
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    Muchísimas gracias Rosario por tu comentario tan halagador para con mis letras. Un abrazo compañera
     
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    Valen_Tina Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    ¡Qué bonito este Azul Recently!!
    Un placer leerlo
    Saludos
     
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    Valen_Tina, Nov 23, 2016
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    Un placer que lo hayas leido y muchas gracias. Un cordial abrazo.
     
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  26. Hechicera de palabras

    Hechicera de palabras Invitado


    Hay poesía en los escenarios y momentos compartidos, si se sabe mirar con ojos de poesía.
    Preciosa visión de una geografía que trasciende los muros de una casa y se vuelve estancia mágica, y sí, azul :)
    Muy bonito.
    Un abrazo.
     
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    Hechicera de palabras, Apr 2, 2018
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    Azul, color de tristezas dicen, pero qué bien enraíza en los versos y las prosas. Gracias por ir rescatando mis primeros pasos en MP, no es un pasado muy lejano porque llevo poquito, pero me saca una sonrisa. Un abrazo, nos leemos
     
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    spring Sonriendo...

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    Gracia y talento en una misma mano.
    Me gusta tu tono poético     Recently, saludinesss
     
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    Gracias spring, las historias pequeñas me recuerdan a caramelos, sin azúcar para proteger los dientes :), me gusta escribirlas. Un placer verte por aquí. Saludos y un abrazo
     
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    Nancysant Poeta que no puede vivir sin el portal

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    Es como si fuera un jueves que prosigue en tonos azules sin importar la estación que se desliza tras la cortina, me gusta mucho este escrito, saludos cordiales.


     
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    Nancysant, Apr 27, 2018
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