Sketch of Love....

**Paloma2** · 11/03/2010, 07:51

My mind becomes a cliché within the complex and abstract nature of love, a feeling that overrides all imaginable cultural understanding of a fantasy.

Ineffable tender covers the unlimited wealth and wisdom of passion and desire confined in seclusion. An intimate crying that outburst as thunder begging to share the utmost of a creative art able to override the most profound desire of oneness. Feel my ardor, a selflessness coupled with an emotion that embraces my heart with a love that delights and commands all bonds amongst eternity.

Love, the absolute reward that conquers defeating with inner passion the involuntary arousing of senses as painful as the legacy of an orgy feast.

**Maramin** · 11/03/2010, 08:10

I dont speake english, sorry...

**Paloma2** · 11/03/2010, 08:24

por Maramin

I dont speake english, sorry...

Tu tiempo para pasar mis letras me honran en cualquier idioma. Haré la traducción, aun cuando algo se pierde. Compartir es alegria y mucho mas complacer en varios idiomas. Saludos con mucho respeto. Paloma2

**cesarfco.cd** · 11/03/2010, 11:32

The mind is everything.

What remains hidden in the standards of reasoning is genius.

Good lines Paloma.

Thanks for sharing.

A hug.

**tatuadora** · 11/03/2010, 13:19

por Paloma2

My mind becomes a cliché within the complex and abstract nature of love, a feeling that overrides all imaginable cultural understanding of a fantasy.

Ineffable tender covers the unlimited wealth and wisdom of passion and desire confined in seclusion. An intimate crying that outburst as thunder begging to share the utmost of a creative art able to override the most profound desire of oneness. Feel my ardor, a selflessness coupled with an emotion that embraces my heart with a love that delights and commands all bonds amongst eternity.

Love, the absolute reward that conquers defeating with inner passion the involuntary arousing of senses as painful as the legacy of an orgy feast.

What a feelin´, friend!
Bueno, a mí me sucede algo similar, aunque no sabría describirlo.
El artista encierra en su interior sensaciones a veces muy extrañas a veces contradictoras, lo curioso es cuando se mezclan entre sí dos sentimientos que a priori no tienen por qué, pero lo hacen...entonces uno no sabe muy bien qué pasa ahí dentro, si es su mente, o si es su corazón...en fin, complicado.
Besotes, Estrella.

**amormejia** · 11/03/2010, 13:43

And what a sketch this is my friend!!! Brilliant approach indeed. I'm fascinated by the ending of this poem. My sincere congratulations to you.

**Paloma2** · 12/03/2010, 18:14

por cesarfco.cd

The mind is everything.

What remains hidden in the standards of reasoning is genius.

Good lines Paloma.

Thanks for sharing.

A hug.

Thank you so much my friend to share with me my thoughts, those standards exceed all reasoning when you know how to use them....
Maybe that's the secret to be a genius?

All my love as always. CRIS/PALOMA2

**SMILEATER** · 11/04/2010, 21:29

por Paloma2

My mind becomes a cliché within the complex and abstract nature of love, a feeling that overrides all imaginable cultural understanding of a fantasy.

Ineffable tender covers the unlimited wealth and wisdom of passion and desire confined in seclusion. An intimate crying that outburst as thunder begging to share the utmost of a creative art able to override the most profound desire of oneness. Feel my ardor, a selflessness coupled with an emotion that embraces my heart with a love that delights and commands all bonds amongst eternity.

Love, the absolute reward that conquers defeating with inner passion the involuntary arousing of senses as painful as the legacy of an orgy feast.

This is a ver good example of what a human being can get
from own thoughts.

There are plenty of words which are fragile
to what they may mean, but there will always be coincidences...

... As with you and me.

It's been a pleasure to visit this short prose.
Stars and a hug for you.

**Paloma2** · 13/04/2010, 06:38

por SMILEATER

This is a ver good example of what a human being can get
from own thoughts.

There are plenty of words which are fragile
to what they may mean, but there will always be coincidences...

... As with you and me.

It's been a pleasure to visit this short prose.
Stars and a hug for you.

Thank you so much for your time and your stars. I learned that thoughts are different types of winds that blows inside your mind inciting an order within the floating and random words..... Greetings with respect. Paloma2

**ROSA** · 17/11/2010, 05:24

por Paloma2

Tu tiempo para pasar mis letras me honran en cualquier idioma. Haré la traducción, aun cuando algo se pierde. Compartir es alegria y mucho mas complacer en varios idiomas. Saludos con mucho respeto. Paloma2

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