Beautiful thought.
Thank you for sharing with us.
By the way, nice picture.
Regards.
What you left behind
Emptiness and space
came to the eccentric root
of my silence.
And here,
I've tried to avoid
the darkest hour
bushing against my thighs…
…An endless desert of seclusion
carrying memories
that were better off left dead
and unnamed…
But explosions
of pleasure drawn
with the shadows
of your deaf fingerprints
lift me up again
on sparkling showers
burned on salt
to water the void
you left behind.
Última edición por K-rolissa; 19/06/2009 a las 23:18
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Re: What you left behind
Beautiful thought.
Thank you for sharing with us.
By the way, nice picture.
Regards.
Tras la musa y su perfume...
Re: What you left behind
This is a great piece. Full of passion. Congratulations!!!
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Re: What you left behind
The intense whispers of your poem leave behind the pain and initiate a dance of solitude and loneliness, expressed immensely well by you. It is the heartache of the one you long for, somehow lifting your shield of memories and intruding in your heart once more. Sweet poem, the pain lingers on, Sweet One.
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Re: What you left behind
Just when I knewall life's answersyou, changed the questions.© Derechos reservados de autor
Re: What you left behind
Just when I knewall life's answersyou, changed the questions.© Derechos reservados de autor
Re: What you left behind
Well the image you used it´s creepy, but i liked it(yes I know it sounds weird)the first part (I don't remember quite well how to say estrofa in english) you opened with ís fantastic, since those three verses you have already a great poem so I can tell you this: You are officially one of my favorite writters here.
I would tell you that I'll be wauting to see more from you but I guess you already know it.
A pleasure to read you here and everywhere, hugs a lot for the pretty you.
Re: What you left behind
i love the way you always writte with the soul and the tears of your heart...
its very emotional, i love it.
xxx and hugs![]()
El amor es la cosa mas simple al mundo,
son los idiotas los que complican todo.
"What goes around, comes around..."
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Re: What you left behind
Ja, What can I say, I have a thing for that kind of pictures (after all im a weirdo) so that point is understandable...
And Red, I deeply appreciatte you reading this, I figured if there was one guy who would be able to give me a straight and honest opinion about it, well that person would be you!! 'cause I don't care what you say... I love your "senseless scripts", I guess we both know what it is to have this perception of reality with a twist...
Salud!!
hugs and kisses.
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