looking for

in the neverending search for love.

always lost in the maze of words.
always diving in the shallow shore
rescuing a day late... plain crumbs,
wore out feelings of...please don't go.
please babe... i promise; i'll change.
and as time goes by... same old, same old.
you don't know... you don't know.
...but you do too... know.


And I do... i want to stay
even tho you and i don't belong
knowing for sure that either way
as time goes by... i will pay
love will hunt me down. i'm easy prey
it will tear me up...merciless,
and then if i happen to scape
i'll be dying at little... every day.

 

How wonderful!

 

Deep, colloquial and...moving!

 

thanks... you are nice.

 

Thank You
midnight blues.

 

Beautiful poem, we are all dying a little every day entangled in love and lack of love my friend. A big hug

 

Hugs needed...
thank You sweet lady

 

I love it, simply love it, making thorough this night. I may take a few days off so if you don't see me after 15 call 911--ja ja ja ja

HELL, NO ... JA JA JA JA

 

Hell yes... tough it up... you will make it thru many nights


and I share this with you...

Levanto mi copa y salud digo... contigo.
por las palabras que endulzan la existencia,
por la decepción que entume los sentidos.
Salud por las bellas, y por las otras,
penas amargas que derrumban los motivos,
y aun en las victorias, nos saben a derrota.

Perdóname vida por tantas lágrimas.
Perdóname muerte...por no saber vivirte.

 

I really love read in english, I find the words full of expressions, searching for my love between darkness and sorrow, and finally just a word change everyting at once. Years go by throught the night and I feel my in pain, dying fast, but just one words change everything, neverending love.

 

Where are you from? are you in the states? you write and read fluently?
English was my second language at one point back when I was a teen...
But gradually became my main...
and you are right... poetry in any language has to give you hope and grace.
even sympathy in times of sorrow.

 

Hi Sir, Iam from El Salvador, but I studied English too, I love this language and poetry too, my first book was ¨The Crush¨ of Sandra Brown, and I find your poetry really exquisite, full of passion and a little of darkness, its a pleasue to read you Gustavo, have a nice day, hugs and kisses.