Loved

So many years I was on my own,
So many years I lived all alone,
But in fact there was to less room for you and me
And so you lived the years beside me,
And so many times you denied me,
But never we tried separate ways (we still agreed)

My Love,
The more you turn away,
The less you have to stay
Say do you really love me or playing just a game ?

All the years I knew I realy love you,
All the times I felt my feelings so low,
But all the years you stood here by me (how could it be?)
Could it be that i was so majestic?
Or could it be that i was uninterested?

My Love,
The more you turn away,
The less you have to stay
Say do you really love me or playing just a stupid game ?

Anytime when you tell me you hate the way we are,
And anytime when we're fighting our private war,
It's like the world is drowning in a lake of pain
And then you say "I love you I need you, need you right here"

My Love,
The more you turn away,
The less you have to stay
Say do you really love me or playing just a rude game ?

So many times I think the guilt is on my own...

I'll never know​

 

Buen poema, lenguaje fluido con algunas impresiciones pero nada que no se pueda entender, te felicito.
Un abrazo.
Alaric.

 

Gracias por leerme amigo!, gracias por tu critica! un abrazo
:::hug:::

 

it s a very sad poem, I d like it.

 

THANK YOU DEAR!

 

jeje.. well done soldier..

cool

 

Hey! what a nice poem man!
I agree with the first person above and I think you should be carefull with your grammar. Anyway, I should say it's very very good.

Congratulations!!!

 

thanks dude!!

 

i'll be the next time dude, thank u!

 

NICE, I like it , a lot, i don't know very much about English grammar, so in that way i'm sorry i can not help you, but, on the other hand, what you have here is a very good poem, intense, sad and sensitive.
My congratulations to you, very nice.
Hugs and stars.

 

THANKS PAISANO!!!!... You really helped me with the other poems... so... thanks u so much!!!!!...

 

Hey Venezolanito! Enjoyed reading your poem. Very nice repetition for emphasis. Keep it up. Lets see something new from you in english, ok?

 

SURE I WILL!! i'm working on it..