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Pretensious Life

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por poetaindagador, 24 de Enero de 2006. Respuestas: 4 | Visitas: 1197

  1. poetaindagador

    poetaindagador Poeta recién llegado

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    Oh, luxurious pale moon your contrast with the black, blinds my eyes
    I have to stop looking at you. But I can't you look so fine.
    You seem so far from me. I can't even touch you.
    But you are always there, I feel you.

    Oh, forever changing sky that you live in my mind help me find the way
    Guide me by the hand. I'm blind can't see the right path.
    Where does the sky end? In my head.
    Me and my sky. We are one.
    We stay clam and change.

    Last night I couldn't find you.
    The sky was obstructed by strange clouds reflecting the city.
    Orange tints no white pale moon.
    But she is there I feel her in my heart.

    We are kissing each other now
    Our hands caressing hairs that fly away
    Her light merges with mine
    We laugh at the world pretending to be eternal
    We cross the sky wondering why
    why we do that?
    we fight and cry
    but we are still together
    holding hands behind the clouds

    We are cold so we refuge ourselves by the sun
    Absorbing he's light to make ours brighter
    We dance. It's night time now.
    Time to leave. Sleep.
    She leaves at lunch
    Leaving nothing
    I sleep and dream
    I think I see
    The sky and the moon
    but where is the sun
    he'll come and shine
    he always does

    Oh, pretentious life take me apart and leave me here alone.
    You got me already. What do you want from me?
    I am you, but I can't feel you. Is what you represent.
    Just nothing and nothingness. You are so fragile.
    But I don't care I'm inconsistent. Imaginative.
    Let me live please and get off my back!
     
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  2. Questions only answered by the light of the moon and the opening of the soul..

    Enjoyed it!
     
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  3. poetaindagador

    poetaindagador Poeta recién llegado

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    Guadalupe siempre tan atenta. Me siento muy honrado por tus comentarios.
    "Consistency is the last refugee of the unimaginative" O. Wilde.
     
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  4. alba calzada

    alba calzada Invitado

    [center:5055e03c93]Amazing..!!!
    The moon light, the sky.. your words..
    All together make one thing.. this beautiful poem..
    Take care.!!!
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    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Orale, rooted in the depths of your heart, the sunshine in fight with the light...of the moon, who clearly wins the thropy, of your eyes in an awestruck glimpse. I like the way your imagination plays with those celestial bodies of our skies, sweet read.
     
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