Take me by your hand

Take me by your hand.
Show me the way to the sun,
to that magical land
filled with laughter and fun.

Swiftly take me! Dear son,
striking my head with a pillow,
leaving non senses undone,
riding bull sharks over billows.

Build by the sea, with your hands,
a strong and towering castle.
Guard not to build over sand.
Avoid the storm and its hassle.

Take me, oh take me! Son dear,
without fear, to a land blessed and kind,
wiping away every tear,
leaving non senses behind…



Geralda Ojeda©2016​

 

Ay que bonito poema has escrito en ingles.
Te felicito. Me ha gustado mucho leerlo.
Saludos y Bendiciones.

 

Lindo tema. Quiero felicitarte porque hacer buena poesía en dos idiomas es bien difícil. Que tengas un lindo día. Saludos.

 

Bello, muy sentido y sublime tema, felicitaciones no es necesario ser muy ducho con el ingles para poder apreciar tu poesía y eso es un reto poder trasmitirlo en otro idioma.
It´s so beautiflul. Congratulations.

 

Lourdes, amiga, gracias por acercarte a mis simples versos. Siempre es un placer ver tu huella en mi espacio. Abrazos.

 

It is truly beautiful poem, I have always believed that for not being a romance language was insensitive, but reading your wonderful poem, I realize that it also conveys sensitivity inject your verses.
always a pleasure to go trough your beautiful lyrics dear fiend.
Greetings, hugs and kisses with appreciation.
Alfredo

(PD. Disculpa que esté todo de cabeza mi comentario, en mi país nos enseñan muy poco este lenguaje, en las escuelas públicas, y por desgracia, bastante mal)

 

Take me where piélagos arise in the tenderness of his eyes and the sun always shine my way away from this darkness. A pleasure to go through your heartfelt and beautiful poetry, reciba mi más cordial saludo.

 

Spring, gracias por acercarte y por tan lindo comentario. I'm sending many blessings your way!!

 

Alfredo, thank you for all your support. Many blessings, dear friend!

 

Nothing like enjoying a poem with such feeling and emotion. In both, English and Spanish your ideas are magnificent. I can feel the harmony between your sensitivity and the verses. It is a beautiful poem my friend!! Hugs and kisses.

 

Fernando,
Thank you so much for stopping by to read my simple poetry. Hugs and blessings.

 

Nancy, thank you so much for stopping by. I am happy to know that you have enjoyed it. I'm sending many hugs and blessings your way.

 

Daniel, thank you so much for stopping by. Hugs and blessings.

 

Nomar, gracias poeta amigo por dedicarme de tu preciado tiempo. Abrazos.