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The Doors Of The Sky

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por avalons_king_bride, 14 de Noviembre de 2005. Respuestas: 2 | Visitas: 1207

  1. avalons_king_bride

    avalons_king_bride Poeta recién llegado

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    [center:fcffcd0019]The Doors Of The Sky


    Can you feel the pulse?, she said
    Of the unborn dreams dying in your head

    Detached from remorse
    We’re settled on this course, she said
    Everybody said

    Detached from your thoughts, she said
    You’re sailing away in your head

    Show me the doors of the sky
    Take me to the doors of the sky
    Take me through the doors of the sky

    I said it is on the temple walls
    How can you argue with chisel on stone?

    Dimly glowing, you should be showing
    Some passing thought for the turf you stand on

    Out of nowhere crawl the shadows
    Out of somewhere come the dreams

    Take me through the doors of the sky[/center:fcffcd0019]
     
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  2. Yes, I can feel the pulse of my dying dreams but, I refuse to let them die!!

    Spectacular as always!!!

    Love and kisses!
     
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    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    wow, i think is intriguing, i think is haunting, i wish a had an ability to see with more insight, by that i mean that, i believe your poem is bigger and deeper than i can perceive, but maybe not, and i am wishing it was :p , but i like it, lots!
     
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