What do you see?

Now look at me,
what do you see?:
a heaven without a God,
a angel without his wings

A human being
that lost his hope,
a human been
with a broken heart

Only one more
in a long sky,
only a bird more
that can not fly

That's what you see
when you look into my eyes
that's what you see
cause you can see more than that

 

It is beautiful, and your question is dificul but not impossible,
if some person try for one time to realy see.
What do you see?
Bye

 

Puedo ver solamente lo que tú hagas real en mí, de ti solo depende.

 

I see a great poem
I cann't see beyond.
You felt as if you'd just woke up
Regards​

 

depende de con q tanto exfuerzo mire el otro

q veo yo?

mi reflejo

jajaja

una persona con sus virtudes y defectos

 

entons todos deberian ver lo bueno de mi
jajaja

claro q tienes razon, mucho depende d lo q uno muestra, pero tmb influye lo q el otro cree ver d vos

gracias x pasar

 

muchas gracias x tus palabras sabrina
mas q despertar, seria ver

 

Beautiful poem Elilix, It's a shame that he can only see that. He shuld see your precious soul, your tenderness and the way that you love. These are the most important characteristics in a person. Congratulations. God bless you friend. Kisses

 

Thank you friend

you always saids the most beautiful things about me

God bless you too

 

Bueno el ingles es un idioma q no me gusta para escribir, me parece q los idiomas de origen latino son mas ricos para eso!!! pero igual me encanta como escribes en cualquier idioma jeje!!! hermoso poema.

 

jajaja

q loco q sos amigo!

muchas graciassss

t amooo

 

NO hay idioma existente que evite decir lo que uno siente...
Adieu mon cherí...

 

thanks you Angel

my pleasure

 

I think the image of yet another crippled bird is the key verse in this reflective poem. I loved the title as well, what do you see? I think your poem invite us to take a flight beyond appearance and contradictions.

 

muy cierto Becquer
gracias x las palabras

 

.. jeje...

what do I see?

I see a byrd, an angel and you..trying to brake free ..
But the wall is to high as you can see..
sad , sort of.. but nice and smooth..

love..

 

no sabia q podia darsele esa interpretacion al poema

q placer

 

It might be "an angel".
I like it...

 

thanks yo pecador

beautiful words

 

ohhhhh

thank you Sol

you are so sweet