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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by cesarfco.cd, Sep 25, 2009. Replies: 12 | Views: 1960

  1. cesarfco.cd

    cesarfco.cd Corrector Corrector/a

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    Everything done
    now waste
    dead on my chest.

    All lived
    it happened
    without ... a nest.

    All expected
    already emaciated
    forgotten.

    Everything is gone.


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    cesarfco.cd, Sep 25, 2009
  2. charo hdz barcenas

    charo hdz barcenas Invitado

    Nothing is forever, everything changes, even this moment, It´ll be other in the next, maybe hurts but It already done, only you must to see the nest day , Sad verses, It was a pleasure to read you
    Kisses and Hugs
    :::hug:::
     
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    charo hdz barcenas, Sep 25, 2009
  3. cesarfco.cd

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    Thanks Charo.

    Regards.
     
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    cesarfco.cd, Sep 25, 2009
  4. HechoArte

    HechoArte Poeta recién llegado

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    "todo pasa y todo queda, pero lo nuestro es pasar"
     
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    HechoArte, Sep 26, 2009
  5. cesarfco.cd

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    That's right.

    "Never pursue glory and leave the memory of men my song"
    Joan Manuel Serrat

    Regards.
     
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    cesarfco.cd, Sep 26, 2009
  6. JOP PIOBB

    JOP PIOBB Exp..

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    Nothing is written yet.
     
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    JOP PIOBB, Sep 30, 2009
  7. cesarfco.cd

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    Brother Piobb thousand thanks.

    A great pleasure to see between the lines.

    A hug.
     
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    cesarfco.cd, Sep 30, 2009
  8. Rosario de Cuenca Esteban

    Rosario de Cuenca Esteban Verso Suelto

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    Como esta e Inglés...no me entero, jajajaja
    Un beso
    Rosario
     
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    Rosario de Cuenca Esteban, Oct 2, 2009
  9. cesarfco.cd

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    Gracias Rosario por pasar entre estos versos.

    Un abrazo.
     
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    cesarfco.cd, Oct 2, 2009
  10. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Wow! What a feeling of destitute and emptiness. Still, I love this poem where everything is gone, but your verses are very much here.

    Dejo cinco*****
     
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    lluviadeabril, Oct 12, 2009
  11. cesarfco.cd

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    Fortunately the letters will stay longer.
    Even after having gone.

    April Rain thanks for reading and commenting.

    A hug.
     
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    cesarfco.cd, Oct 12, 2009
  12. Esme

    Esme Poeta adicto al portal

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    A pleasure being here..unfortunalety nothing is forever.. :(

    Esme
     
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    Esme, Oct 30, 2009
  13. cesarfco.cd

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    Nothing is forever ... only just enough time to know it's worth.

    A hug.
     
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    cesarfco.cd, Oct 30, 2009

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