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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by JBR, Dec 7, 2009. Replies: 5 | Views: 838

  1. JBR

    JBR Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Each time.




    Every time I see you,
    between the crystalline waters of that river
    your beautiful body.


    you silence my senses,
    awaken my cravings
    sleeping by time.


    Is because I love you,
    is because having between my arms,
    you revive what I have inside.


    And nothing stops me,
    I want to continue, watching you,
    I want to continue with my view, loving you.


    I would also like to drink this water,
    mitigate my great thirst
    mitigate my heat
    [COLOR=navy]that I burned inside of me be.[/COLOR]


    [FONT=Nyala][COLOR=navy]Every time I see you,[/COLOR][/FONT]
    [B][FONT=Nyala][COLOR=navy]filled my soul of desire[/COLOR][/FONT][/B][FONT=Nyala][/font]
    [B][FONT=Nyala][SIZE=4][COLOR=navy]and pleasure.[/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT][/B][FONT=Nyala][/font]
     
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  2. JBR

    JBR Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    I appreciate wonderfull coment to my poem, greetings.
     
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  3. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    There's nothing more beautiful than what you have just written, I wish a river like that exist. I loved this poem very much, it has such an amazing flow of emotions. Congratulations JBR ! :). Can't wait to read the next one!
    Love, Pemberley.
     
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  4. JBR

    JBR Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thank you very Much for you great coment, you have for sure i will publish other one very soon, thank you again, greetings.
     
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  5. RAFAEL_SANDAV

    RAFAEL_SANDAV Poeta adicto al portal

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    [COLOR=Navy][I][B]Dear friend, a very beautiful poem, well structured and music. Today I discover another one of your faset and I had been a real pleasure. I congratulate you and send you all my stars for ever your soul is full of that desire. A big hug friend. [/B][/I][/COLOR]
     
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  6. JBR

    JBR Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Waoo, thank you very much my dear friend, have for sure u will see more of this along, one's again thank you, and receive a big Hug too.
     
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