Fate -A fancy word

lluviadeabril · Apr 22, 2016

Redwing · Dec 10, 2009

lluviadeabril said: ↑

Lets think about the thing that you call fate,

a bunch of nonsence, a dark escape
for those who fail to take control
of things that drop right at their
door.

The question, you dont understand.
It's not a language that you care to learn
and when you finally take a stand,
time will have come, it will have gone.

Ill be no more, a heart bled dry,
malleable sentiments turned a mold so stern.
Into the darkest places of your mind,
youll run and look, dig deep and find
a fancy token, an excuse,
a craze you wave about, white flags,
a thing called fate,
[SIZE=3]that thing called fate.[/SIZE]

[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]Youll look for me, for it, no more.[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]You have escaped and well, youll cry, [/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]but not for long, a second maybe, and[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]then move on as if the moment never were,[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]as if that second, never born.[/SIZE][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT]
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[CENTER][FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]Youll label things around our space. [/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]An empty bed emptied by fate, youll write in ink,[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]our chair, my books, the very corner of your soul [/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]it was our fate [/SIZE]

[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]the sign, in crimson red, will say.[/SIZE][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/CENTER][FONT=Centaur][FONT=Centaur][FONT=Centaur][FONT=Centaur][FONT=Centaur]
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Oh surprise, this is great and kinda acid, just the kind of things I like to write or see and... fate? what's fate? I don't think that truly exist but... I´ve heard it's a good excuse.
Good rithm and rhymes, the message is clear enough and rough to say so... it's amazing.
You got me, I´ll be reading you every time I see you.
Hugs for you, it's been a great pleasure to red you.[/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]

lluviadeabril · Dec 11, 2009

Redwing said: ↑

Oh surprise, this is great and kinda acid, just the kind of things I like to write or see and... fate? what's fate? I don't think that truly exist but... I´ve heard it's a good excuse.
Good rithm and rhymes, the message is clear enough and rough to say so... it's amazing.
You got me, I´ll be reading you every time I see you.
Hugs for you, it's been a great pleasure to red you.
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What kind words --you made my night. I love to write and can tell that you do too.

My poems are somewhat like my humor and sadly not everyone appreciates it.

It's wonderful to be here and come in touch with people like you.

Thank you, a huge hug.

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