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senryu (florencio)

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by FJMalpica, Aug 15, 2020. Replies: 8 | Views: 824

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    FJMalpica Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Muchacha en flor.
    Tu piel es un perfume
    citando amores.

    Análisis

    Mu/cha/cha-en/ flor. +1
    Tú/ piel/ es/ un/ per/fu/me * piel palabra monosilaba
    ci/tan/do-a/mo/res
     
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    FJMalpica, Aug 15, 2020
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Hermosa letras poeta, me gustan mucho. Un saludo cordial.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Aug 15, 2020
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    FJMalpica Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Gracias y saludos ...
     
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    FJMalpica, Aug 15, 2020
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    Dvaldés Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Bonito y sensual senryu nos regalas. Un gusto.
     
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    Dvaldés, Aug 21, 2020
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    FJMalpica Poeta asiduo al portal

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    gracias, muy amable
     
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    FJMalpica, Aug 25, 2020
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    marlene2m Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    una imagen hermosa
    que describe la belleza
    de la juventud.
    saludo
     
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    marlene2m, Aug 25, 2020
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    FJMalpica Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Ciertamente apreciada poeta, un saludo cordial
     
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    FJMalpica, Aug 25, 2020
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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    El amor asi imbricado entre un nacar de perfume que yo
    diria nacarado de esencias. bellissimo. saludos de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Mar 18, 2022
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    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Una hermosa y sensual imagen. Buen fin de semana
     
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    María Baena, Mar 19, 2022

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