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Psychotic Shout for Attention

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Andrés Castro Arévalo, Aug 25, 2007. Replies: 4 | Views: 1166

  1. Andrés Castro Arévalo

    Andrés Castro Arévalo Poeta recién llegado

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    "Hello, welcome to my
    personal fantasy.
    You can call it hell."
    those were my last words
    to Alabama.

    Midnight road raging,
    seeking to quench the thirst
    of my basic instincts.
    A lonely alley on a bad neighborhood:
    I found my lucky victim.

    I stopped and offered her
    a free ride on my rotating bed.
    Promised her I would change her life.

    She agreed and hopped in.
    As of now, the fifty-dollar fee
    started to count.
    She would regret her greediness.
     
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  2. *Sabrina*

    *Sabrina* Una niña gris

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    Nice!!!
    That good history
    I liked much,
    I enchanted the badness with you wrote it
    Great
    Regards
     
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  3. RINOA

    RINOA EXPULSADA

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    Absoluuutely misterious and tetric
    FANTASTICALLY-WRITTEN AND IMAGINATED...
    Ufff...awesome
    I only wish that you pay her...
    ^^ Nice work, greetings!
    RINOA:::hug:::
     
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  4. Andrés Castro Arévalo

    Andrés Castro Arévalo Poeta recién llegado

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    I am glad that you liked my poem, it means a lot to be liked by fellow poets. Take care.
     
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  5. Andrés Castro Arévalo

    Andrés Castro Arévalo Poeta recién llegado

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    Hi, thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. I am trully glad and excited that you liked it. It is interesting to see that you noted correctly, that "Alabama" was my artistic and fantastic name for a prostitute, I think you are the only one who has catch that until now; Thank you very much for that.

    Yours truly
     
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