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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by FernandoLacrimae, Jan 8, 2007. Replies: 8 | Views: 1255

  1. FernandoLacrimae

    FernandoLacrimae Poeta recién llegado

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    Death,
    I’m waiting for her.
    Pain,
    it’s my only and best friend.
    Loneliness,
    the only one who is with me.
    Darkness,
    my true lover who lives in my dreams.
    The Moon,
    she’s the muse that keeps me alive.
    Love,
    the reason for me to die.
    Sadness,
    the feeling that will never leave my heart.
    My thoughts,
    I can’t understand them, my head is dark.
    Silence,
    the only one who really understands.
    Death,
    I’m waiting for her . . .
     
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  2. En el corazon de la Luna

    En el corazon de la Luna Poeta adicto al portal

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    Cuanta tristeza derraman tus versos, me dio gusto pasar por aki, saludos.
     
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  3. FernandoLacrimae

    FernandoLacrimae Poeta recién llegado

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    Gracias por leerme. Ke bueno que la tristeza sale de mis palabras. saludos y date otra vuelta jaja.
     
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  4. My dear Fernando, you show alot of sadness in your words, and makes me feel like the same, because of you, I really want that you can be aout of all of those feelings, if I can help you, you can stand by me, it´s no good for you to be in the darkness take my friendship like shine lighty from the sun
    A lot of kisses for you

    :::hug::::::hug::::::hug:::
     
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  5. FernandoLacrimae

    FernandoLacrimae Poeta recién llegado

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    Thanx for the good wishes, but darkness is everything but a bad place to me. I love it, and the sadness, my forever muse.
    Besides, this is an old poem, a very old poem. I feel very happy today.
    Kisses!!!
     
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  6. JENN_TEJAS

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    Such A Beutiful Poem And So Sad It Was A Pleasure To Be Reding Yo Hugs And A Kiss De Jenn
     
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  7. FernandoLacrimae

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    Thanx for reading me. Im glad you like it. Hugss and, i dont know, take kare jaja
     
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  8. Fernando Azul casi Morado

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    damn dude, you really REALLY suck!
     
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  9. retana

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    We all are waiting for her (death)...don't yuo think love should be the reason for you to live?...that's what I think, because love makes you happy, makes you smile, mekes you to see everything pretty nice and better, to me, love is life, but I still love your poem it's kind off sad and I like sad poems, it was a pleasure to read of you....te dejo mis estrellas y te felicito.
     
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