WhEN DeaTh Becomes ThE BeST EsCaPe

When death is the best escape,
Life and death, there’s just a little line,
So I stop crying, stop trying,
I just wanna rinse this all away,
Rinse the blood running down my face.

When death becomes the best escape,
Everybody stay in the past,
My memories are confused
Love just said good bye,
With a shining sun
That I really never saw…

When death is the best escape,
Loneliness can go away,
Life just can’t hurt me anymore,
So I stop crying, I stop trying,
This clear night becomes my safeness,
Becomes my everything, my end…​

 

When everything seems to be broken... everything has blood... everything bleeds... i hope u not to die cuz you write so nice... congrats!!... see u soon!..

 

Thank u realy very much, kisses

 

I like this poem very much,it is just wonderfull.
5 stars for you...

 

Can it be? is it true? who knows what does it feel to be dead...?

Puede ser, solo que nadie lo sabe, mientras tanto seguiremos escribiendo que asi lo es, por que debe ser hermoso seguir pensando en ese refugio.

My Placer to be here!​

 

Its realy cool for me that you liked my poem, see u soon

 

Tamara,
Is a really deep and insighted poem,
Death the inevitable death,yet merciful...
It's been a pleasure
regards
Paloma M

 

thank u so much

 

Psycologists say that when a person decides to die, his sadness and depresion desappear and they're like a new person. So that's when everyone has to take care of them...
I like your poem, I feel like that every time, it's a pity, but it's true.
Thank you for share it with us.
Hugs!

Sol.

 

Is better: "When the life is the only beauty"
"I wake up, and think
there's no life like this, there's no think like this way"
"I will fight, because the fight bless my blood in my face,
There aren't death if I pick up my sword
My weapon brokes the wall only with a word...

But is a very good poem for a zombie or a gothic...

¡Por la Tierra! ¡Pour la vie!
Almatierra

 

si... talvez.. pk solia ser gótica..
jeje saludos

 

Sad and lonely, like a teardrop overflowing... what? good read Tam, keep it up, laters.

 

thanks a lot