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I won't last a Day without You

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Etherea, Jul 3, 2006. Replies: 3 | Views: 1133

  1. Etherea

    Etherea Poeta fiel al portal

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    Sweet sweet smile
    why did you take your love away?
    dear child of mine
    my life goes on as I pray.

    Memories of better days
    fade as they cross my mind
    crying for your embrace
    I lay my head down at night.

    I can breath no more
    god kindly asked for my due
    as I've never done before
    I just told him I love you.

    How can I say I have faith?
    How can I sustain I'm true?
    I sold my soul for a chance
    the chance of changing your mood.

    Sweet sweet smile
    green green stars in your eyes
    remind me that paradise
    -apart from the pain and lies-
    is not yet that far...
    so far from our lives.

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  2. Etherea

    Etherea Poeta fiel al portal

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    Thanks a a lot, Wolfgang. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem.

    You're right, sometimes we sacrifice everything for that "one love".

    Big hug!!
     
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  3. poroeta

    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Etherea, are you a piscis? soo much tragedy in your love, is like a blessing and a curse, he/she that loves always hurts, your pain is perceived in this poem very clearly, i hope it doesn't stay long enough to leave a scar, saludos.
     
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  4. _Airis_

    _Airis_ Poeta veterano en el portal.

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    Etherea... first: great poem and second: I MISS YOU HERE!! I wait for your return... :) I want think that this return will be soon! .... (K)
    your little girl... Albita! :)
     
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