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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by lord_of_illusion, Dec 7, 2008. Replies: 4 | Views: 1632

  1. lord_of_illusion

    lord_of_illusion Poeta adicto al portal

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    a silent night
    surround my deepest
    and painless thoughts,
    your shadow became
    my pray, my weakness...

    My sorrow behind
    your tears,
    my fears behind
    your untold history...

    Speechless times
    before the dawn,
    calm down this anxiety
    of our memories...

    Blind and dark eyes
    staring at me,
    like hunger wolfs
    hunting into the night...

    I feel your passion,
    rotten...
    Forgotten...
    I feel the rust
    of time,
    among my sleeping hands...
    No more poetry,
    no more rime...

    Just this solitude
    covering my mind,
    numb...
    Fog...
    Doubt...
    Fallen days
    of tears and cry...
     
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  2. Jaherus

    Jaherus Poeta adicto al portal

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    un melancolíco poema, el cual ha sido un placer leerlo.

    Posdata, me recordo algo de un poema que escri hace tiempo:

    Sigo llamandote,
    aullando en la noche.

    Saludos cordiales. Jaherus
     
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  3. Belu

    Belu Padme

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    Isee a great poetry,
    I´m wondering what could I read if your hands weren't sleep.
    Congratulations,
    stars, obviously...
     
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  4. lord_of_illusion

    lord_of_illusion Poeta adicto al portal

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    Antes que nada grandes disculpas por dejar mi primer morada tan abandonada, tengo mucho que agradecerle aeste primer espacio, un gusto enorme el poder regresar a compartir y ser compartido, un abrazo a la distancia y gracias nuevamente por el tiempo otorgado a mis letras.
    the lord
    alex
    un abrazo fraterno Jaherus
     
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    Thanks Padme for this visit, it is an honor having you here, sorry because i take to long for an answer, but i lost my self for a long time somewhere in my head, i just come back again, im glad because of this comment.
    i send my blessings and best regards
    warming hugs
    the lord
     
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