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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7754 | Views: 255017

  1. dragon_ecu

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    Los pies descalzos
    el lavado papal
    en fila esperan
     
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    En fila esperan
    las hormigas hambrientas
    sobre su presa
     
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    Sobre su presa
    disputan los dos gatos,
    fuertes maullidos.
     
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  4. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

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    Fuertes maullidos
    despierta al vecindario
    la gata en celo.
     
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    La gata en celo
    alboroto en el techo
    un perro ladra
     
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  6. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

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    Un perro ladra
    hay alguien merodeando
    de madrugada.
     
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    De madrugada
    un venado se asusta
    relampaguea

     
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    Relampaguea,
    revuelo de libélulas
    primeras gotas.
     
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    Primeras gotas,
    al refugio seguro
    las golondrinas.
     
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    Las golondrinas
    entretejen sus nidos
    de nuevo abril
     
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  11. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

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    De nuevo abril
    hileras de hormigas
    atareadas
     
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    Atareadas
    las abejas inquietas
    revolotean
     
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    Revolotean
    mariposas azules
    en el estómago
     
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    En el estómago
    igual que un huracán
    suenan los vientos
     
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    Suenan los vientos
    en el nido las aves
    abren sus alas
     
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    Abren sus alas
    planeando en lo alto
    algunas águilas.
     
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    Algunas águilas
    vuelan alto en bandadas
    termaĺ planeo.
     
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    Termal planeo
    sobre las olas lentas
    mirando un pez
     
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    Mirando un pez
    nadando en su pecera
    así es la vida.
     
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    así es la vida
    oruga... mariposa...
    tela de seda
     
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    Tela de seda
    el utero materno
    vientre perfecto.
     
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    vientre perfecto
    las estrías le cubren
    risas y llantos
     
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    Risas y llantos
    en la arena de un parque
    huellas pequeñas
     
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    huellas pequeñas
    sobre viejos caminos
    reviven ciclos
     
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    Reviven ciclos
    las larvas y las pupas
    agua estancada
     
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    agua estancada
    enérgicos se mueven
    los renacuajos
     
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    Los renacuajos
    desde la superficie
    el lodo flota
     
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    el lodo flota
    junto con la belleza
    flores de loto
     
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    Flores de loto
    resaltan en la hierba
    cuando amanece
     
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    cuando amanece
    persisten en el cuarto
    maullidos cálidos
     
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