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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7754 | Views: 255163

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  1. crisantemo

    crisantemo Poeta fiel al portal

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    no hay chirridos

    en la rama desnuda

    columpio roto.

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    Perdón me quedó fuera de plano ya que el chirrido que propongo no es animal sino de roce y queda un poco forzado, mejor seguir el de Maramin. Es mejor opción
     
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  2. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    No hay chirridos
    de grillos en el prado,
    día invernal.    ​
     
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    Día invernal
    bajo los pies crujidos
    como en mi pecho.​
     
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    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    como en mi pecho
    explotan las rosas que...
    la lluvia apura
     
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  5. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    La lluvia apura
    los pasos de la gente,
    se abren paraguas.    ​
     
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    Se abren paraguas;
    las veredas mojadas
    niños gozosos
     
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    Niños gozosos
    chocolate caliente,
    fiestas de mayo.

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    Es una tradición en Argentina beber una taza de chocolate caliente en las fiestas patrias, sobre todo el 25 de mayo.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Fiestas de Mayo,
    las madres y mujeres
    reciben flores.    ​
     
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    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Reciben flores
    vítores de la gente;
    jóvenes músicos
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Jóvenes músicos
    ensayan instrumentos.
    Caos musical.    ​
     
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    Caos musical;
    el público ya llega
    ¿y el director?
     
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    ¿y el director?
    buscando la batuta
    en el atril.    ​
     
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    en el atril
    se deslizan con gracia
    las partituras
     
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    Las partituras
    sobre los instrumentos.
    Notas de prueba,    ​
     
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    Notas de prueba

    percusión vientos cuerdas

    todo mezclado​
     
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    Todo mezclado
    en el turbión que baja.
    un gran torrente.    ​
     
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    Un gran torrente
    de agua fría desciende
    en primavera.    ​
     
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    En primavera
    arroyos de deshielo
    ¡agua muy fría!
     
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    Agua muy fría,
    manantial de montaña
    destila hielos.    ​
     
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    Destila hielos
    cima cordillerana.
    ¡Un condor vuela!

    ​
     
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    Un condor vuela.

    En el risco subida

    cría de cabra.​
     
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    Cría de cabra
    buscando a su madre
    entre peñascos
     
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    entre peñazcos
    el musgo se sostiene...
    llegó la niebla
     
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    llegó la niebla

    con el mismo pincel

    un bello haiga​
     
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    Un bello haiga,
    con tintas de colores
    finas figuras.    ​
     
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    finas figuras
    la sombra de sus dedos
    sobre mis labios

    (senryû)
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Sobre mis labios
    el roce suavecito
    de dulce lengua.    ​
     
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    de dulce lengua
    el humectante labial...
    labios partíos
     
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    Labios partidos
    con severas heladas
    son dolorosas.    ​
     
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    Son dolorosas
    heridas esos besos,
    con este frío​
     
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