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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7754 | Views: 255203

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    Era repleta
    de estrellas titilantes
    aquella noche.
     
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    Aquella noche
    de lluvia torrencial
    cayeron rayos
     
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    cayeron rayos

    en el hinojo tierno

    un caracol
     
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    Un caracol
    bajo las margaritas,
    cordón de plata.
     
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    crisantemo Poeta fiel al portal

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    cordón de plata

    luna llena de otoño

    ¡esa linterna!
     
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    Esa linterna
    perforando la noche.
    ¡Oh, la luciérnaga!
     
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    ¡Oh, la luciérnaga!
    en el verano cálido
    entre las flores
     
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    Entre las flores

    en la noche cerrada

    menudo grillo.
     
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    Menudo grillo
    se filtra silencioso
    entre la hierba.
     
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  10. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Entre la hierba
    una sola amapola
    que mece el viento.
     
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    Que mece el viento
    los juncos suavemente,
    croar de ranas.
     
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    croar de ranas.

    todas dicen lo mismo

    en esta poza.
     
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    En esta poza
    sobre el agua estancada
    la flor de loto.
     
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    La flor de loto
    con los pies en el agua
    el joven monje
     
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    El joven monje
    con su escudilla nueva,
    los ojos bajos.
     
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    Los ojos bajos
    el sol los encandila
    la sed arrecia.
     
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    La sed arrecia,

    sin agua suficiente,

    pues a la flor.
     
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    Pues a la flor
    se suben hormiguitas,
    viento del sur.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Viento del sur
    arribando la barcas
    de plata llenas.
     
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    De plata llenas
    las arcas del bandido
    ¿nadie lo busca?
     
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    ¿nadie lo busca?

    bajo la helada capa

    el caminante
     
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    El caminante
    va dejando en el barro
    huellas profundas.
     
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    Huellas profundas

    bajo la nieve musgo

    marcas de dientes
     
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    Marcas de dientes
    en la hierba roída.
    Huellas de topo.
     
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    Huellas de topo
    en planicie llovida,
    final de otoño.
     
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    Final de otoño.

    Almanaque sin hojas,

    estropeado.
     
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    Estropeado
    el césped por los topos,
    los agujeros.
     
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    Los agujeros
    en los tejados viejos;
    fuerte granizo
     
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    Fuerte granizo
    pétalos de geranios
    caen al suelo.
     
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    Caen al suelo
    los higos ya maduros,
    llegan los tordos.
     
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